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My Forest Trek

one afternoon set out into woods my heart began beating in thuds all along, saw wild flowers and strange herbs so pleased, I kept moving on a jaunt so rewarding the whistle of a quail fell in my ears, sweet and the rhythm of the tapping of a wood pecker also the creaking of dry leaves under my feet- all familiar sounds to any forest trekker a soft gurgling sound from a cataract, I heard~ a lullaby sweet March.29.2022 A Combination of Forms Poetry Contest Sponsor- Emile Pinet

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Date: 4/4/2022 7:51:00 AM
Your imagery brought the forest into my mind "he whistle of a quail fell in my ears, sweet and the rhythm of the tapping of a wood pecker also the creaking of dry leaves under my feet-"
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Date: 3/31/2022 8:53:00 PM
From verse to verse, your love for nature speaks, singing a sweet lullaby to the universe. Beautifully penned Valsa!...ab
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Date: 3/31/2022 11:51:00 AM
Oh, so heart-warming. Your dainty expression heals a lonely heart. All the best in the contest.
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Date: 3/30/2022 3:45:00 AM
Globetrekker or Hiker? Enjoyed the adventure with u ( some concern arose why thudding of heart, but sweet relief, tat-tat- rat- a - rat- tat of woodpecker?) Shalom shalom
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Date: 3/30/2022 1:38:00 AM
What a lovely walk in the forest. I yearn for nature. Unfortunately I live completely alone like a hermit.
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Date: 3/29/2022 8:19:00 PM
This complicated combination of forms has been done quite effectively. Valsa, you've done an excellent job with the views and noises of the woodland.
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Date: 3/29/2022 6:51:00 PM
Vasal, I felt such peace from your poem. Your words painted a beautiful picture. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/29/2022 5:37:00 PM
Just love the last stanza, Valsa. Your lullaby has lulled me into a state of near-sleep this evening ~ Gershon
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Date: 3/29/2022 2:01:00 PM
Nicely done, with welcoming imagery, Valsa. Good luck in the contest my friend, Bill
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Date: 3/29/2022 10:28:00 AM
Very well executed in this complex blend of forms. Beautifully crafted sights and sounds of forest, Valsa.
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Date: 3/29/2022 7:01:00 AM
You take the reader on a pleasant forest trek Valsa, being at one with nature is good for the soul. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
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