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My Forest

In the forest of my dreams,
I would be tall and thin.
There would be happiness and love,
flying like beautiful white doves.
When the forest opens up for all to see,
the castle that was built just for me.
Lovely spring flowers fill the grounds,
pretty birds sing to the top of their tiny lungs.
In the forest of my dreams,
I would hide away from all who do not care.
I would live in peace and love,
write and live just for me.
Maybe there is a forest of my dreams,
oh heaven I do wait and wish as I dream.
Date Written: 4/13/2021

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Date: 4/14/2021 11:36:00 AM
Great imagery, I was following you through your forest! It is there, Right now, all you need to to do....is choose to be in it. Lovely poem Pangie
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/16/2021 7:49:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you were following me through my forest. Want the castle next door??? Have a blessed day................
Date: 4/14/2021 11:22:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Paula. I love where you took this prompt. Excellent ~
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/16/2021 7:47:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. An, Excellent. WOW, Thanks. Glad you like this one. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day................
Date: 4/14/2021 10:51:00 AM
- A wonderful dream, Paula ... keep dreaming, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/16/2021 7:45:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this Dream write. Wish it was real. Have a blessed day with hugs................
Date: 4/14/2021 9:13:00 AM
YOUR IMAGINATION IS RIFE PAULA, AND YOUR POEM ROCKS! HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/16/2021 7:43:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like My Forest write. Have a blessed day with hugs................
Date: 4/14/2021 7:41:00 AM
Superb imagery, delightful verses dearest, Paula!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/14/2021 8:21:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day................
Date: 4/13/2021 2:42:00 PM
Hello Paula Goldsmith, this poem is beautiful. As I read this poem i felt I was in the woods with you. Enjoying the scene. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/14/2021 10:57:00 AM
Hello Paula Goldsmith, It sounds like a nice place to live. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/14/2021 8:19:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you enjoyed my forest write. I wish I lived there. Have a blessed day...........
Date: 4/13/2021 2:14:00 PM
Very nice Paula. I love the ending too! :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/14/2021 8:18:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you love my ending. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed day...........