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My Foolish Heart

My foolish heart fell hard in love And was shattered to smithereens I wish I had control thereof Now I'm crying behind the scenes My foolish heart faltered in love And was wounded with hopeless dreams For he was not sent from above Now I'm sighing with silent screams My foolish heart, when will you learn That life's not a sweet fairytale Now I am left alone to burn Tarnished memories that assail 02.13.2021 For Craig Cornish's "My foolish heart" contest

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Constance La France

Date: 2/15/2021 12:10:00 PM

Jo, you have penned a wonderful poem for Craig's contest, I hope to so it on the winners list, I like that word smithereens _Constance

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/14/2021 4:45:00 AM

My friend love has its winners and its losers. The winners rejoice while the losers bathe in tears and sorrows. Sadly such is life, such is growth. Your poem highlights that experience.. AFav... God bless...

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/14/2021 2:38:00 AM

Ahh... sad... God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/13/2021 6:17:00 AM

Your poem evokes the sadness heart feels. So well written:..Tarnished memories that assail ..

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/13/2021 1:46:00 AM

Lovely entry for the contest. Hope you will win. ~~