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My Flower Love Evenescent Wayra

She calls in silence, colored light showering rain with streaming memory, cry... elusive her dance, lost... a scent of summer fades away SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA Poetry Contest Sponsor- Nette Onclaud Syllable counts 5, 7, 7, 6, 8,

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/3/2019 6:21:00 PM

Hello Rick Parise, Iam pleased that you won first place. Have a nice evening my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2019 11:50:00 PM

Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/22/2019 5:18:00 AM

Bravo on your well deserved first place, Rick. Well done.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2019 12:59:00 AM

A gorgeous entry Rick. I loved this! It had such an emotional effect. Congratulations on your well deserved First Place win! : ) xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2019 3:20:00 PM

Love your interpretation of the image, congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/21/2019 2:50:00 PM

A lovely poem from a dark picture. Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2019 2:10:00 PM

I think I just took the picture too literally. You came up with a beauty. Congrats!

Rick Parise
Date: 8/21/2019 2:36:00 PM

Thankx, Andrea ;) I'm off to read the winner list. Take care!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2019 1:43:00 PM

- A beauty, Rick :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/21/2019 1:40:00 PM

your contemporary images match the expressionist theme of this challenge...a poem way out of the ballpark... thanks for this beauty written for my contest and cheery congrats, rick!

Rick Parise
Date: 8/21/2019 2:35:00 PM

Thank you, nette, what a great honor.....I'm thrilled!! God BlessU

Lu Loo

Date: 8/21/2019 1:40:00 PM

simple, beautiful, smooth yet deep. Well deserved win my friend :)-luloo

Rick Parise
Date: 8/21/2019 2:39:00 PM

Howdy, Thanks for taking the time to comment. Take care. ;) #aponderingpoet

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/18/2019 3:46:00 PM

Every line is beautiful. Well written Rick.

Rick Parise
Date: 8/21/2019 2:40:00 PM

Thanks for the sweet note. Take care and may you have a blessed day!!!