My Flaws Indeed Vs My Flawless Breed

My Flaws Indeed

My nose is too flat, I have a double chin
I am not sure when face wrinkles started to win

My hair is curly, sometimes a frizzy mess
A hand -held blow dryer is some days useless

One leg is too short from a knee alternate
It takes a great effort to walk really straight                    

I have high arches, I cannot wear high heels
Nor can I wear a dress, without curve appeals

Cancer diagnosis left me, half a whole
Why could it not have been my largest black mole

I could go on and confess all of my flaws
What the heck, I drew the shortest of the straws

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My Flawless Breed

My smile is genuine, still have all my teeth
To my family, genes I hope to bequeath

My hearing is still good for all that it is worth
But it was much better, at my precious birth

My eyes see very well since I had R K
Once saw a foot, now I see a mile away

A sense of humor I do have plenty of
I plan on sharing, with all the ones I love

My heart is big enough to catch love to hold
And strong enough until I get extremely old

My talents are many just to name a few
Most of all I treasure everything I do                 

Copyright © 2010  By Caryl S. Muzzey

Tenth Place Winner ~ "FLAWLESS vs’ FLAWS” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: SKAT
Feb. 17, 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/23/2011 5:23:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Caryl, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 4:10:00 PM
caryl, I would have put this one up higher. I think you did an excellent presentation, sweetie. Congratulations on your win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:02:00 AM
Many congratulations Caryl on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:36:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:12:00 PM
Nicely done, Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:32:00 PM
A nice double set of rhyming couplets. Congratulations on winning with these.
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:36:00 AM
Hi Caryl - Very Good! I liked this one too! IMHO - should have placed higher! In the TOP 3. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:14:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Caryl. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Caryl
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:32:00 AM
Good one! Congrats on your well deserved win, dear Caryl. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:05:00 AM
Just beautiful.Many congratulations for this top win.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:48:00 AM
Congrats Caryl on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write my friend.. enjoy another top ten success with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:45:00 AM
I really love this poem. So honest, so genuine. Congratulations on your winning position. It is most deserved. Best wishes. Love, Deb
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:48:00 AM
CARLY~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat
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Date: 1/24/2011 9:52:00 AM
Even though I was sad to hear about the cancer diagnosis (obviously you've beat it - hurray!), this poem is witty and entertaining. I like the way you compared your favorable qualities to your flaws, Caryl. This is a great entry for the contest, and I'm pulling for you to win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:52:00 AM
Awesome write, Caryl! Enjoyed every line you have penned and so funny! Hope you will succeed in SKAT's contest!...Have a nice week!...Gert
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:35:00 PM
A clever write on the lovely you Caryl. Good luck in the SKAT's contest with this gem....:)
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Date: 1/21/2011 7:24:00 PM
Awesome to me, Caryl!! Regardless of flaws, you're beautiful, girl! Just read your poems! Only a beautiful person could write these gems! They come from your spirit, your soul! Happy weekend! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:57:00 AM
wow, I see this very honest approach to the contest doing quite well in this interesting contest, Caryl. I am glad I came here and read this today. Luv ya, Andrea (ps. I did a poem like this a long time ago, it's easy to list all our flaws but in reality, I think more people are closer to flawless in the eyes of their maker)
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:55:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Caryl. I enjoyed reading it today. May you have a wonderful weekend and always find inspiration to continue your writing. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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