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My First Sonnet

Finally gonna give a sonnet a shot Never really tried one before Limericks are fun, have written a lot Sonnets, I'll try three or four Don't judge me harshly, I beg of you Be gentle, I'm a sensitive soul Treat everyone like a favorite old shoe Give you my coat if you're cold Don't think I'm a conceited old dude Different to what you'd expect Not spoiled per say, never cranky or rude A simple lad who enjoys his sex To end this sonnet, I'll leave you a kiss Right on your yummy bare parts I'll try to be accurate, real sorry if I miss And try really hard not to fart!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/20/2017 12:15:00 PM
Jack your sonnet was wonderfully done. Your humor whether it be limerick or sonnet always comes through.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/20/2017 12:22:00 PM
That's all I know!!! LOL Thanks for dropping be AGAIN Michael!!!
Date: 10/20/2017 9:30:00 AM
Lol! Jack, You first Sonnet is like no other. It was really funny . I can't wait to you pen another :-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 10/20/2017 2:56:00 PM
Jack, I'm no expert on the form but it looks mighty fine to me. I've never seen one so humorous and I enjoyed it very much:-) Alexis
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/20/2017 9:34:00 AM
Are you saying I didn't follow the rules!!! LOL Will write another and be more attentive!!! Lovesies, Jack xxx
Date: 10/20/2017 8:41:00 AM
I will not go toe to toe//with you and sonnets you know//I'm a mouseketeer//not a sonneteer//but yours is a way better show. (secret: When I grow up I want to write a haibun) SONNET ON JACK SPARROW!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/20/2017 9:07:00 AM
And a clever mouseketeer I might add! Worry not, limericks are still king! CHEERS!!!
Date: 10/20/2017 8:37:00 AM
Look out Sonnets here comes Jack! Fabulous fun dear, I have yet to try the form myself. Good morning!! mo hugs
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/20/2017 9:03:00 AM
Give it a shot Miss Mo!!! Iy's fun and easy! xxx
Date: 10/20/2017 7:00:00 AM
Haha... what a great first sonnet my friend.. who said you can't teach an old dog new tricks!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/20/2017 7:08:00 AM
This old Canadian Husky is happy to hear it tickled your hooha!!!
Date: 10/20/2017 6:18:00 AM
LOl...the jokes break through even with a sonnet! I had a tough time, at the beginning writing limericks. It is fun to practice other forms. I mainly write free verse. Enjoyed, Jack!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/20/2017 6:26:00 AM
LOL So whatcha think? Will I be a serious poet some day? PROBABLY NOT!!! xxx

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