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My First Kiss

I wasn’t boy crazy, they didn’t make my young heart sing. Silly older girls might yearn for them, but they were not my thing. I had four older brothers, there was no mystery about them, And other than my brothers I could simply do without them. That was the situation when he took me by surprise. Buddy Cartright kissed me there in front of brothers’ eyes. I looked to see if Mama saw, I knew that she would scold And maybe box poor Buddy’s ears for acting out so bold. I don’t know if they egged him on or maybe paid a quarter. My brothers often did things that they surely hadn’t oughter. I feared that I would be in for a mighty lot of teasin’, And glared at Buddy just as though I thought he’d lost his reason. Buddy grinned a silly grin and was lookin’ sort of proud. There were lots of things I’d like to say but couldn’t say aloud. But do you know what happened? My brothers never teased me About Buddy being so obnoxious and that really should have pleased me. Buddy acted just the same and didn’t show that he was yearnin' To repeat the same audacious act that left my young cheeks burnin'. But I thought quite often of him and even of some others. Maybe not all the boys were like my own exasperating brothers. I watched as big girls flirted and were giggly and quite vain, And knew someday I'd like to have a boy kiss me again. For Frank Herrera’s contest “Your First Kiss, First Love, First Broken Heart.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/19/2011 7:26:00 AM
this is a nice story I enjoyed the picture you painted. cory
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Joyce in Frank Herrera's contest "First Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/17/2011 5:15:00 AM
Many congrats, Joyce : )
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:56:00 PM
whoopie Joyce I'm smiling from ear to ear and darn girl you know I love slang and dialect! such a charming write one to treasure! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:43:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your well deserved win in the contest---kashinath
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:43:00 AM
Super Congrats Joyce on your 3rd place win.That was quite an interesting write on a first kiss.enjoyed reading this. Love, Gautami
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:28:00 AM
worth the ride, joyce.. cheers for the high win! :) huggs
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Date: 4/15/2011 7:28:00 PM
I love the part about boxing poor Buddy's ears...very lovely poem!
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:47:00 PM
Priceless and precious, Joyce. Many congrats on your SENSATIONAL WIN, Lainie
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:35:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your super big win in Frank's contest with this excellent entry on first luv and kiss my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 4/15/2011 3:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/8/2011 11:50:00 PM
So sweet, Joyce. So you DID like his kiss!! Very nicely done for the contest.
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Date: 4/8/2011 8:18:00 PM
Maybe you should have boxed Buddy's ears Joyce. I didn't care much for boys when I was a youngster either. Enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for your comment. Maybe I will ask someone here if it's okay to write a 'coffee' poem for them. I had fun writing for the legends contest. Good luck in Frank's contest. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 4/8/2011 8:00:00 AM
As this week draws to an end here I sit reading such amazing poetry. I am happy yours is one of the ones I am reading today Joyce. I wish you a healthy, joyful, inspiration filled weekend. The best to you in Frank's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/7/2011 4:41:00 PM
Just below is my comment..Soup mail..Sara
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Date: 4/7/2011 3:58:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* Precious, sweet and beautiful canvas of brilliant in bright, poetic art, I was overcome within the emotions of something very tender I believe, but, whom would not be when beholding, "Such 'Gifted & Lovely Beauty.'" === my love always, jasper
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Date: 4/7/2011 3:55:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* Alright my dear lovely lady, close your beautiful eyes, and pucker up those precious pretty lips and, let's do this ~ Smile ~ What a sweet and wonderful painting my dear. = I remember when I was around eleven years old, a very pretty girl my age liked myself and one day, I spit on her ~ Smile ~ fifteen years later we met and shared a moment amid loves time. == I hope that "Your Beauty," did not mind my innocent com from above for, after experiencing the loveliness of this ~ cont:)
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Date: 4/7/2011 3:14:00 PM
Joyce, this is sooo adorable! I'm actually blushing!! lol....I have six older brothers, so I totally hear you! Best of luck to you! Ellen
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Date: 4/7/2011 12:31:00 PM
Buddy was quite brave, Joyce. Boys usually look for a sense of approval before planting a kiss. Still, if he hadn't made the first move, you might not have had such a delightful poem to share with us. Really enjoyed this one, Joyce. I have only one older brother and he still enjoys "tormenting" me at time, but it's all for laughs. Best wishes in Frank's contest with this great entry! Love, Carolyn
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