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My First Kiss

Today I was thinking About my first kiss It’s really hard for me Because it was so long ago And to be brutally honest Drugs Have taken their toll On what is left of my memory It was back in the time Of building hot rods And cruising Main Street Which for me was Chester Ave. in Bakersfield, Calif. I was perhaps 13 Cruising the strip With a buddy of mine named Warren Though his last name eludes me Lost forever in the archives of dust At 13 I looked 18 which was a good thing Because the girls we met Bordered 18 And I do remember That I was scared to death One girl was ok The other was, “Oh my God” BEAUTIFUL And I latched onto her Like a junkyard dog Does a thief in the middle of the night And the one girl rode with Warren In his car And I rode with the other In her car And I suggested we drive Out to Hart Park We all sat together Drank some beer Smoked some pot Then her and I walked Down by the Kern River Near the spot where I Had watched my Mother drown And I told her the story And there in the moonlight Lost in the beauty Of her eyes She ask, “How old are you anyway” I wanted to say 18 I wanted to lie But she was so beautiful That all I could say Is that I was 13 I expected her to get so mad But instead She asked, “Have you ever even kissed a girl”? The answer was “No” And as burnt out as my memory is I will never forget The mischievous look In those beautiful eyes Like a lioness About to pounce on her prey How her lips Seemed as soft as a cloud And her skin Was like nothing I had ever touched And she took me away To a place I had never been She taught me How to love Far beyond my years And through all the years Known as the hell of my life She is the only person I only knew for a minute That I could never forget Written for John's Contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/14/2009 5:44:00 PM
My eyes could no longer read for my heart has jumped in. Very touching and heart warming write. -Alley
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Date: 3/15/2009 4:56:00 AM
Like water dripping from innermost forest no explorer has been before this poem is haunting, nostalgic, and a powerful write, keep doing, man. Thank you
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Date: 2/16/2009 3:12:00 PM
As a nostalgic-free verse writer, I have to applaud this piece. Aside from the honesty of the experience, it is a priviledge to be allowed to see in the soul of another. Well done MJ! Forgot to rate
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Date: 2/16/2009 3:10:00 PM
As a nostalgic-free verse writer, I have to applaud this piece. Aside from the honesty of the experience, it is a priviledge to be allowed to see in the soul of another. Well done MJ!
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Date: 2/13/2009 8:49:00 PM
I love this poem its so interesting it makes me just want to hear more...lol nicely done
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Date: 2/13/2009 8:18:00 AM
Michael, how ironic it must have been to have your first kiss at the site where your mother drowned! This poem truly captured my interest; after my husband died, I was swimming with my new fiance when he drowned in spite of my futile attempts to save him. Sad times certainly evoke the artist in all of us. Nice job - Carolyn
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Date: 2/12/2009 10:02:00 AM
Ah the audacity of youth. Great story and very well told.
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Date: 2/10/2009 8:31:00 AM
wow, i love the construction and format, but most of all, i love the twist and turn of the words. we never forget the 1st one do we? janetta
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Date: 2/9/2009 7:31:00 PM
I said OMG, OMG twice. Had to leave this monitor a moment and come back. To read the rest. What a weird bunch of feelings you must have had. Hope the kiss wiped away your bad stuff... I really do. Kim
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Date: 2/8/2009 12:57:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/7/2009 1:25:00 PM
writen like an O'Henry story with great details. the old double standard will hardly be noticed because who cares. if ya got lucky ya got lucky and thats a good thing. right? John H Loving III
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Date: 2/7/2009 12:46:00 PM
Wonderful job on this bro..wishing you well in the contest.
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Date: 2/7/2009 12:26:00 PM
Wow...simply wow...i love the honesty and sincerity of the moment. Gave a vivd picture the Mrs. Robinson feel and the innocence of youth. wtg Michael...Keep doing what you're doing. :-)
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Date: 2/7/2009 11:01:00 AM
I remember my first time fondly. Also when I was about 16 I went to see "Black Sabbath" perform, and my friend (also that age) and I were talking to two twenty year old woman. That is one of the reasons I can relate to you poem. "soft as a cloud" - nice image
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Date: 2/7/2009 10:25:00 AM
This is good man.... really like the creativity of it as well. It weaves in and out the mind like a well written saga. enjoyed reading and have a wonderful day.
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Date: 2/7/2009 9:18:00 AM
This sounds like a scene out of a movie, Michael. You could write a screenplay...I really do think!! Well done! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/7/2009 9:17:00 AM
wow Michael this is amazing, I agree with adell, I think we have a winner haha. This was just so awesome and innocent. Every word was perfect awesome write! Sorry I haven't been on in a while School is a bit busy right now starting a new semester, but I'll post something soon. Love, ~Michaela~
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Date: 2/7/2009 8:18:00 AM
I feel a winner in the midst, Michael this is an awesome write my friend, the innoncence of youth is very well displayed within the lines of this marvelous write, the emotions are quite vivdly displayed throught the read. Excellent imagery, tone and figurative langauge flowing throughout. I thank you for sharing the read. Good Luck In the Contest ! Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 2/7/2009 7:22:00 AM
You know Michael, I must agree with Kristin. I cannot get rid of the chills. What a beautiful memory, so brilliantly captured. Your poetry rocks. Not that you need it, but good luck. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/7/2009 6:28:00 AM
This is such a wonderful story Michael. It flows very smoothly and is rich in emotion. Awesome writing, my friend! Good luck! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/7/2009 6:05:00 AM
Beautifully done, Mike. You definitely convince the reader of your sincerity. Great write. Love, daver
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Date: 2/7/2009 3:19:00 AM
All I can say is, wow. For me, this is the best poem you've ever written, I got chills. LOVED this sincere, beautiful, touching, special write of a first kiss, simple amazing. well done, and that sounds like such an awesome kiss!!!!!!!!! Love, Kristin
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