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My First Escape

The prison I was kept in was small, dark and wet I didn’t know how I got there or how long I would stay Yet I had a sense of comfort and felt I’d be okay And didn’t have the courage to escape from it quite yet I could hear voices around me in a language I did not know The space was getting smaller with every passing day My anxiety was reaching a crescendo to finally be on my way And something innate inside me was urging me to go Through a dark and narrow passage I started my way to squeeze Screams of pain and anguish echoed through my head Somehow I felt that my leaving to another’s pain had lead As I continued through the tunnel; first my head and then my knees A rush of cold air and bright lights made me release a cry of joy Being helped now by others to pull me from my cell Free to unbend and stretch and let out a healthy yell As they handed me to my mother saying, “Congratulations, it’s a boy”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/24/2010 8:57:00 PM
What an inspired descrip[tion of the birth experience. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on your well deserved win in Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen's contest "Being Trapped and Breaking Loose". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:07:00 AM
Ohhhhhh yeah! Birth memory GOOD one! congrad's light & Love
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Date: 7/17/2010 2:39:00 PM
VERY creative one, Joe. WAY TO GO! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/17/2010 11:29:00 AM
Big congrats Joe on your winning poem in Dane Ann's great contest with this remarkable write and terrific win for u to so enjoy .. with luv..
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Date: 7/16/2010 11:09:00 PM
wow, not the ending I expected, well done, congrats on your win
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Date: 7/15/2010 8:30:00 PM
nice, very original!
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:49:00 PM
I love this Joe! Fantastic write about your birth! Great job. In fact, it goes to my favs. this a.m. Peace, love, Audrey
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