My First Escape

The prison I was kept in was small, dark and wet
I didn’t know how I got there or how long I would stay
Yet I had a sense of comfort and felt I’d be okay
And didn’t have the courage to escape from it quite yet

I could hear voices around me in a language I did not know
The space was getting smaller with every passing day
My anxiety was reaching a crescendo to finally be on my way
And something innate inside me was urging me to go

Through a dark and narrow passage I started my way to squeeze
Screams of pain and anguish echoed through my head
Somehow I felt that my leaving to another’s pain had lead
As I continued through the tunnel; first my head and then my knees

A rush of cold air and bright lights made me release a cry of joy
Being helped now by others to pull me from my cell
Free to unbend and stretch and let out a healthy yell
As they handed me to my mother saying, “Congratulations, it’s a boy”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 8:57 PM
What an inspired descrip[tion of the birth experience. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations Joe on your well deserved win in Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen's contest "Being Trapped and Breaking Loose". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 6:07 AM
Ohhhhhh yeah! Birth memory GOOD one! congrad's light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 2:39 PM
VERY creative one, Joe. WAY TO GO! Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 11:29 AM
Big congrats Joe on your winning poem in Dane Ann's great contest with this remarkable write and terrific win for u to so enjoy .. with luv..
Roberts Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 11:09 PM
wow, not the ending I expected, well done, congrats on your win
Phipps Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 8:30 PM
nice, very original!
Haick Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 10:49 PM
I love this Joe! Fantastic write about your birth! Great job. In fact, it goes to my favs. this a.m. Peace, love, Audrey
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