Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Limerick

My First Car

My First car
I bought my first car; a Burnt golden Daf
An automatic vehicle that did not cut a dash
The seats folded flat
We could make use of that
But when the brake failed, we hit the stream with a splash.

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Harry Horsman March 24, 2012 at 3:34 PM i missed this one, excellent limerick, harry

Sean Kelly March 21, 2012 at 4:17 AM Mandy , I actually had one of these , many moons ago and when I sold it 2 years later , managed to make a small profit on the deal .Hope you have dried out , since then and best of luck in the contest . Beeep beeep ....

Judy Ball March 13, 2012 at 1:48 PM Nice job Mandy. Cute as a button with great imagery. Made me smile. God Bless and thanks so much for your comments on My First CAR. JB

Debbie Guzzi March 4, 2012 at 5:53 AM bet that was scary! Thanks for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

Brenda Victoria Northeast March 4, 2012 at 3:56 AM That's such a laugh, wonderful images and great fun, loved it, brenda : 0

Nette Onclaud March 4, 2012 at 2:09 AM laughing out loud, mandy... soo cute and well done... just posted mine for this contest and called my car Stardust... but yours is really grrreat!... your daf is a winner!..: huggs!

Deck Fitzgerald March 3, 2012 at 3:40 PM Big smiles Mandy luv and much enjoyed , Declan xxx ( mail ) Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 4, 2012 at 2:05 AM Thanks Dec will be in touch xxooxx

James Fraser March 3, 2012 at 1:09 PM Nice one Mandy, and oh! my the images. Limericks are fun to write, I like this one. Have a great evening & Sunday :) James Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 4, 2012 at 2:08 AM Thanks James , srub you mind out you bad boy ,we learnt how to drink sherry in that carXX

Gwendolen Song March 3, 2012 at 11:13 AM To celebrate the very first car seems like a great idea for a contest! A mighty fine limerick, Mandy. It just might steal the show! Gwendolen Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 4, 2012 at 2:06 AM Thank you Gwen what a lovely thing to say xxooxx

The Situation March 3, 2012 at 9:10 AM cute. i liked this. it worked unlike some disASTERS I'VE SEEN ON HERE Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 3, 2012 at 10:42 AM Thank you,

Samual Ronthorpe March 3, 2012 at 1:02 AM Mandy, very nice limerick. Best of luck on Carol's contest. Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 3, 2012 at 7:05 AM Thanks Samual xx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 2, 2012 at 3:46 PM Splash.... Good one Mandy :) - luck to you in contest.Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 3, 2012 at 7:05 AM Thanks ann lise xxooxx

Sara Kendrick March 2, 2012 at 2:23 PM Enjoyed reading this one today..Reads like a winner if for the contest...Thanks for stopping by..Sara Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 3, 2012 at 7:06 AM Thank you sara and congrats on all your wins xx

Judy Ball March 2, 2012 at 1:15 PM Ooohoohoo! What a sad ending to your first car. I wrote one too by the same name. Great write and fine entry for the contest. Good luck. God Bless, JB Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 3, 2012 at 7:07 AM And same to yo u Judy, boy I did love that car xx

Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2012 at 10:57 AM haha, CUTE one, mandy. Burnt golden, huh? I'd love to see what it looked like.

Robert Pettit March 2, 2012 at 10:25 AM Nice limerick, but what make is a "Daf"? Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 2, 2012 at 10:47 AM Hi and thanks Robert Leyland it was a Daf 44 i loved it to bits and then it fell into them xx

Nette Onclaud March 2, 2012 at 9:18 AM laughing out loud, mandy... nothinglike memoeries of one's first car.. a winner you got!..) huggs! Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 2, 2012 at 10:48 AM Thanks nette hugs back xx