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My Favourite Dish

When mom would make her apple pies, and I was very small I would stand upon a kitchen chair, so that I could see it all She would open up the Crisco can, and a flour canister And soon, before my very eyes, some pie dough would appear She would roll the dough, line her dish, then let me have a try She would save a piece of pastry for a doll sized dish I prized... Side by side, she would show me how, but mine would be a mess!! Her patience was amazing.…. as she sought to grant my wish The petals of her apple slices, layered neatly into rows Most of mine in disarray, some landing on my toes! A sparkling touch of sugar sweet, and some golden butter bows Such praise I got, ....the oven hot, .....then off to bake it goes... We’d watch them turn a golden brown…as love filled up my nose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/19/2012 9:10:00 PM
Wonderful memory poem, Carrie. Big congratulations.
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Date: 1/19/2012 10:11:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win, don't know what a "Crisco can" is but I loved this, send some over pronto please..David
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie x
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:00:00 AM
congrats Carrie on a brilliant win for this tasty fav dish .. luv ..
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Date: 1/19/2012 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations on the win for you in David's "My Favourite Dish" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 2:10:00 AM
Carrie My mum always made us lovely apple pies also. Reading this took me back to when I was small. I use to sit and watch what she did. I would tell her I was learning so that I could make the perfect apple pie like her when I got married one day. I have been married 22 years and my husband is still waiting. I must have not listened as well as I thought. Thanks for the memory. Pam. xx
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Date: 1/8/2012 5:17:00 PM
Delightful poem and memory !! Enjoyed !!
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Date: 1/7/2012 3:17:00 PM
MMMMMmmm, delicious. The memories of mom and daughter in the kitchen are the most intimate of all. I really enjoy your giftedness. You are my poetry star!! Gwendolen
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Date: 1/7/2012 8:43:00 AM
I to cook with my daughter sitting on the counter top dangerous i know but she loved it!! 7up for cooking with the mommy
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:46:00 PM
Your favorite dish is now my favorite poem - hey I am American, I can spell it "favorite", right? Love the flow and meter. And who says poems can't smell - this one is baked with the pleasant aroma of a warm slice of apple pie - ala mode, of course.
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:26:00 PM
No dish is more American than apple pie. You have described everything so well here.
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