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My Favorite Vacation

We went off in a huge silver plane,
to a far off new land and prayed it would not rain.
Never knowing what we would find,
never knowing how they would be so very kind.
When we went to explore the next day,
WOW~was all we could say.
We rode in a bus~tram~fire truck and more,
we went on ride after ride until four.
Then off to the pool,
to play and get cool.
The next day~we talked with a mouse,
he was standing outside of his house.
Many photos were taken,
a perfect vacation they were a ma-ken.
The parade was really something to see,
our eyes were wide as they could be.
Then off to see a baby lamb in a petting zoo,
my sons comments about lamb chops made other visitors go ooh.
We cried when we told the duck good by,
maybe next year we will be back~we will try.
Date Written: 1/14/2022
Note: Did you figure out it was Disney???
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Date: 2/12/2022 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Paula, lovely write. Hugs ~ Debra
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/13/2022 9:17:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Gad you like this family vacation. Have a blessed day/week to come with hugs...........
Date: 2/12/2022 6:36:00 AM
Oh, this is fabulous vacation poem my dear friend, Paula. I enjoyed so much. You brought me vicariously there through your words. I hope our present situation will get better and we can travel again. My last tour was 2019. Thank you for sharing my dear friend. Have a glorious weekend. God bless you always. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/12/2022 8:37:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Gad you enjoyed our fun family vacation. We had a great time. Have a blessed day/weekend............................
Date: 1/21/2022 7:30:00 PM
Paula, greatly enjoyed your vacation tour with your family ! Each time we go on a vacation, we pledge to make another trip in the near future !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/22/2022 2:20:00 PM
Thanks for writing. Gad you enjoyed this fun vacation write. It was taken many, many years ago. Have a blessed day/weekend............................
Date: 1/14/2022 10:50:00 AM
Paula, your writing reminded me of my recent vacation to Disney World with my grandchildren and all of our experiences, which filled us with tremendous delight and joy. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/15/2022 10:28:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Gad you like this fun vacation write. Guess you had a great time/vacation. Have a blessed day/weekend.............................

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