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My Favorite Memory

My very first picnic is my favorite memory of all time. Fried chicken, potato salad and a loving smile, sublime. With a blanket and basket, she chose a spot by the trees. I felt so special with Mom, in the warm summer breeze. I recall my state track meet. She stood there cheering me on. I've countless memories to comfort me, now that she's gone. The first time I skinned my knee; her kiss made it all better. My first year away from home; each week Mom sent a letter. When she fell sick and I moved back home to provide her care, after radiation and chemo, she smiled though she lost her hair. It was a special bond we formed, as I watched her slowly die. I'll always cherish the special moments between my Mom and I. Time moves on, as it does. Life will bring you a lot of change. Memories you make will always keep your loved ones in range. My heart is still there, in the gentle hands of her golden palm. I’m thankful this contest reminded me of my memories of Mom. July 31, 2020 Dusty Old Memories Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 8/8/2020 3:50:00 AM
Wow! You've expressed those beautiful and touching meories remarkably Mark. I lived them as I read your words. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/8/2020 6:10:00 AM
Thank you so much! You are so kind and I appreciate that
Date: 8/7/2020 12:26:00 PM
Mark, congratulations on your win in my memories challenge with this excellent write, so emotional, it truly touched my heart, a FAV for me _Constance
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/7/2020 4:04:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the generous placement I greatly appreciate that. Thank you so very much!!!
Date: 8/7/2020 1:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/7/2020 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Anne, Same to you
Date: 8/6/2020 11:03:00 PM
Very touched by your love for your Mom, Mark. I'm sure she was always very proud of her son. Wonderful trip down memory lane, poetically rendered as a keepsake and love letter to your mother. Congrats for the win ~ John
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/7/2020 8:55:00 AM
I hope she was, Thank you so much John!
Date: 8/6/2020 8:05:00 PM
Such heart jolting memories that touch the spirit with bittersweet sensations, emotions and inspirations. Your heartfelt memories are exceptional and heartwarming, in spite of the ache I'm sure they bring to you. God bless you always
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/7/2020 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Regina, I really enjoyed writing this. My memories are strong. God Bless you!
Date: 8/1/2020 9:12:00 PM
G'day Mark ... just a beautiful verse laying tribute to your Mum. Fond memories never fade nor drift away with time - thank you Mark - Lindsay
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/2/2020 5:42:00 AM
It’s amazing how many old memories surface when you stop and think. Thank you
Date: 8/1/2020 3:48:00 AM
So sad that you lost her to cancer Mark, its a dreadful disease. But beautiful memories you have and she lives on in your heart and mind. Have a great weekend and good luck. Tom
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/1/2020 5:30:00 AM
It was a very difficult time in my life but it was 25 years ago. Thank you so much and have a wonderful weekend.
Date: 7/31/2020 3:17:00 PM
This is a beautiful tribute to your mother Whois no doubt reading this from her heavenly seat Mark.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 7/31/2020 3:58:00 PM
Thank you so much! I sure hope she reads it.
Date: 7/31/2020 2:58:00 PM
- You were a great son of your wonderful mother, Mark - A poem from your heart ... lovely written :) - Good luck in the contest :) - ( Soup mail ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mark Koplin
Date: 7/31/2020 3:58:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words and wishes!
Date: 7/31/2020 2:47:00 PM
such an emotional poem mum, you will always have those cherished memories:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 7/31/2020 3:57:00 PM
Thank you Jan! I have many to get me through.

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