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My Father's Lens

In a shoebox of old family photos sits one of my father at 21, standing like Goliath holding two oars across his chest like a giant X canoe at his feet before the diving accident before the lake rocks sliced his skull before the steel plate planted his anger erasing his beer-laced charm. His recovery confused by what's comfortably familiar having to cut away the bandages of dark. His restoration floating on an axis of rotation in a new dimension of self My father's turbulent reality, fitful form like someone drowning in waves disfigured a broken swell Poem revised May 5, 2021 For Brian Strand: You Choose Poetry Contest August 17, 2021

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Date: 1/22/2021 12:18:00 PM
I am enjoying your many writes. This one is a sad yet a wonderful story/write. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings as you write away.....................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/22/2021 2:31:00 PM
Hello Paula, Many thanks for you kind remarks. The plate in my dad's forehead gave him a painful life. Unfortunately his anger sat like a great weight on the family. Best wishes always, Brian
Date: 1/2/2021 6:41:00 AM
A very emotive work. I have heard about accidents like this that do brain damage and change a person's personality. I know that was a horror for the whole family and your father. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/4/2021 4:37:00 PM
Hello Sara, you are most insightful. My father's dreadful accident had repercussions for all. It kept my dad out of the war as a young man which greatly distressed him. Look after yourself dear lady. Sincerely Brian
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/3/2021 3:56:00 AM
Brian, I can imagine what it must have been like to live in that atmosphere and also the pain your father must have suffered. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/2/2021 3:11:00 PM
Hello Sara Thank you for your insights. My father did suffer from terrible headaches all of his life. His temper, too, was a firecracker. It takes seconds to be disabled by an accident. Take care. All the best, Brian

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