My Father's Lens

In a shoebox of old family photos
        sits one of my father at 21, standing like Goliath
        holding two oars across his chest like a giant X
        canoe at his feet
        before the diving accident
        before the lake rocks sliced his skull
        before the steel plate planted his anger
        erasing his beer-laced charm.
His  recovery confused by what's comfortably familiar
        having to cut away the bandages of dark.
His restoration floating on an axis of rotation
        in a new dimension of self

My father's turbulent reality, fitful form
        like someone drowning in waves
        disfigured
        a broken swell









Poem revised May 5, 2021
For Brian Strand: You Choose Poetry Contest 
                                August 17, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Goldsmith Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 12:18 PM
I am enjoying your many writes. This one is a sad yet a wonderful story/write. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings as you write away.....................
Sambourne Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 2:31 PM
Hello Paula, Many thanks for you kind remarks. The plate in my dad's forehead gave him a painful life. Unfortunately his anger sat like a great weight on the family. Best wishes always, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:41 AM
A very emotive work. I have heard about accidents like this that do brain damage and change a person's personality. I know that was a horror for the whole family and your father. Congrats on this winner. Sara
Sambourne Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 4:37 PM
Hello Sara, you are most insightful. My father's dreadful accident had repercussions for all. It kept my dad out of the war as a young man which greatly distressed him. Look after yourself dear lady. Sincerely Brian
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Brian, I can imagine what it must have been like to live in that atmosphere and also the pain your father must have suffered. Sara
Sambourne Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 3:11 PM
Hello Sara Thank you for your insights. My father did suffer from terrible headaches all of his life. His temper, too, was a firecracker. It takes seconds to be disabled by an accident. Take care. All the best, Brian
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