My Dreams Are Like Poems

My dreams are like poems, they come to me 
through that unseen door to the unknown mind.

Why and when they come I know not--in my youth
they came as child's play first, then later as poems
of soft love and hard lust, some written, some lived.

As my youth aged, the poem-dreams faded,
until one forgotten day the great door slammed
shut without a sound....

For half a life-time it was sealed tight,
forever I believed--until some small wonder
chanced to pry it open... what I do not know:
perhaps the memory of a tangible dream, 
a dream real as life of a long lost love.

Now the dreams come in platoons-- the poems 
oft with them-- two sides of the same golden coin?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Roper Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 9:27 PM
L.J., great poem and very well written . Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year. Hugs Eve ~`*
Carber Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Eve, my friend, and may I wish you and yours a very blessed 2019!
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December 28, 2018 at 4:06 PM
L.J., have you ever received inspiration for a poem when you were dreaming? It happens. A dream I had a couple nights ago could be a novel. And it's said our most creative thinking is done in the Alpha State, just before falling asleep. Enjoyed hearing about your dreams! Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Carber Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Thanks Carolyn, and yes, I suspect 'inspiration' comes from dreams--Coleridge wrote 'Kubla Khan' after a dream, it's said. What amazes me most is how we all seem more imaginative in our dream life than in our waking life! (p.s. Are you going to write the novel?)
Merryman Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 2:01 PM
I'm sure there's a connection between dreams and poetry. Nice write, Len! Congrats! Blessings!
Carber Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Thanks, Kim! I appreciate it-- and I do suspect creativity may be born in the unconscious-- soul?-- as some of my best 'stuff' comes to me in the morning, soon after I awaken. I suppose there's a metaphor in there somewhere....
A  Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 12:50 AM
Len :) Congrats on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Little Me - Guess Who" and celebrate your win. Forever and Ever **SKAT**
Carber Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 6:20 PM
Thank you, Skat-- as always, I feel honored.
A   Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 12:59 AM
LEN, Congrats on your poetry win. LINDA
A  Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Len, Congratulations on your nice win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I'm taking, this time, to explain how I really enjoyed every entry. I truly wanted to place every poem, but two with higher placements. However, it is a contest and with all the bickering going on about the way we judge our contest. I did not place everyone the way I wanted to in this contest. I do APOLOGIZE. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "Favorite Type of Poem" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate by sharing with us, Your Favorite type of poem. Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT
Carber Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 2:40 PM
Getting old, Skat, gives one a greater perspective on life. I no longer think that being number 'one' means you're better than number 2, or #ten or not placing at all. The reality is as the cliche goes, fame is fleeting-- I'm happy if a few people. even one person, gets a bit of meaning, a novel way to look at life, out of one of my poems. In truth, I'm happy just to be able to give birth to them, and as with any child, no parents really knows how the kid is going to turn out-- so please, no need to apologize whatsoever-- instead, seek joy and know God holds us all in his hands.
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 2:42 PM
Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
A  Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 6:31 PM
LEN, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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August 10, 2015 at 1:55 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Ien! Great work!
Fleming Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 4:49 AM
This is rather good! It deserves more attention.
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