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Sometimes my dreams are not as they seem, they may be happy or sad or brightly gleam. To dream is to wonder and ponder on things, as sometimes I feel like a puppet on strings. I know how life goes as the temperature rises, I know as I grow my dreams bring surprises. Sometimes my nightmares are scary as can be, in the morn’ I’ve been warned unintentionally. I may sweat in the night full of fright and fear, but I may wake in the light with my blankie near. I've been stuck in a dream filled with trepidation, I've been stuck in a rut from my dream's interpretation. I've been going with the flow as I keep to my dreams, and some mornings I wake up full of loud screams. Sometimes my dreams or given during the day, I remember signs in the things people say. I've always dreamed to be a songwriter and singer, hoping one day strum a guitar with my fingers. To dream in life is to have many aspirations, and to pass down your legacy through generations. Many dreams come from our intimate intellect, not knowing when we fall asleep what to expect. To dream is to think of things from imagination, something popping out of our mind’s creation. Dreams - Poetry Contest Nayda Ivette Negron Revised January 19th, 2018

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Date: 1/21/2018 9:36:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Laura.
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Date: 1/21/2018 7:35:00 PM
Congratulations, Luloo, on your win with this well-written poem about dreams, those mysterious things. Janice
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Date: 1/20/2018 8:30:00 PM
Laura, you said much about dreams here. Yes, they are such interesting thing!! I have various themes in my dreams but several that I keep going back to but just different characters with the same "feelings" behind the dreams. I like how you ended by talking about the other kinds of dreams, goals! Wouldn't it be awesome if we could DREAM our goal "dreams" to come true!! Great entry for Nayda's contest.
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Date: 1/19/2018 7:42:00 PM
Love this! The seamless flow and unique rhymes are spot on!
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/20/2018 2:25:00 AM
many thanks lovely lady ;)-luloo
Date: 1/19/2018 6:52:00 PM
Through our dreams, particularly our dreams when we sleep, I do believe Laura, messages are given and answers can be found, people we love who are no longer around, can come to calm, reassure, messages delivered. Your personal dreams of converting your words into song, never, ever give up. Robert Haigh here is a fine musician. There are others. You should collaborate with a musician here. I believe dreams come true. Follow your dreams, go grab them, make them happen. Leanne x
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/20/2018 2:25:00 AM
aww thanks so much for all your kind words sweet Leanne! :)-luloo
Date: 1/19/2018 2:20:00 PM
A sweet rhythm and flow... Lovely poem...All the best Laura
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/20/2018 2:24:00 AM
thank you Arturo :)-luloo
Date: 1/19/2018 1:08:00 PM
- The fantasy in our dream world is amazing ... a great poem, Laura :) - Best wishes in the contest - Lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/20/2018 2:24:00 AM
many thanks lovely lady ;) -luloo
Date: 1/19/2018 10:53:00 AM
Dreams, If we could only choose the ones we want. Brilliant piece Laura. Regards Tom.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/20/2018 2:24:00 AM
thank you sweet Tom ;)-luloo

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