My Dreams

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Inspired by hoto from internet /imagination being there.

I stand on the mountain's edge In wonder with all the colors in view Panoramic beauty spreads before me With every shade of color to be seen The sun casts rays through the clouds Like a warm loving angel floating above Blue mountains, where dreams are scrolled Yellow, red and gold trees like an awakening Touched by the pure white birch trees Standing with prominent messages There is no destination too far to reach The color of my dreams can be clearly seen It is all in the landscape for me to follow But in this moment, I am above them all Heidi Sands 10/29/17

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Mike Gentile

Date: 10/30/2017 1:40:00 PM

I am so glad you posted, Heidi. This one is beautiful and you are blessed to have such beautiful dreams. xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2017 8:04:00 AM

Hi Mike. Thank you for you visit to this and kind comment too :) Happy Tuesday !

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/30/2017 6:23:00 AM

I could follow your write quite easily, and it was a marvelous journey through the entire poem! I loved the descriptions you presented and allowed me to visualize exactly what your were trying to portray...that beautiful picture you posted that was extraordinary! What a superior piece my friend, such a delight to read, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/30/2017 11:59:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and comment Russell. Have a good day!