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9/14/25 for "My Dream Within A Dream" Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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My Dream Within A Dream

“Butterflies in the stomach, a smile that won't go away, and it's like an addiction that makes a person yearn for more. It's not something one thinks about, it's something that's felt, involuntarily.”   - Shelena Shorts 

   My dream within a dream -
I ponder this; what might it be?
    When I was but a teen,
        romantic notions flitted
   through my mind like butterflies -
illusive, beautiful and bright.
  I chased them as I dreamed awake.
      Catching them was another thing!

   I suppose the dream of many
       is to find a love that’s true, but
  I always longed for the allure
      of love that lights the soul on fire -
         a lasting, blazing deep desire.
  Such love ultimately burns out
    but for fleeting moments 
         I held a butterfly or two!

    Sweet butterflies linger not,
They are dreams within a dream.
      Oh, to feel again the tickle -
         that flutters in the tummy
       making me a little crazy!
    How nice to be revisited
      by butterflies now and then.
 Though elusive, they show themselves
      at times inside my poetry.
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Kerr Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 3:53 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. This is a haunting piece with layers of golden moments that will linger in the reader’s mind indefinitely. Your work has a universal resonance for those who cherish memories of romantic encounters. I’m most grateful for your thoughtful assessment of Inner Vocal Quiver. Howard
La France Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 3:28 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Dream Within A Dream contest, judged 09/29. Your poem is beautiful and I love the quote and image, Constance
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 12:05 PM
Thanks very much, Constance. I loved writing this
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one today. Love the artwork accompanying it. Sara K
George Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 4:54 AM
Hi Andrea, back to your lovely poem with Congratulations on your first place win.
Agustin Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 12:39 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Guptar Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations, poet friend on your top win in this contest with a superb poem with beautiful imagery of butterflies to paint love in youthful days- often like a dream within a dream that delights the heart, but flits away in a while. Wishing you a delightful dream like day.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 8:44 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Great Picture... Have a fun day with your win as you go writing away..........
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:39 AM
romantic notions flitted through my mind like butterflies - illusive, beautiful and bright... Oh, to feel again the tickle - that flutters in the tummy making me a little crazy! …ooh so good, dear one! Congrats, Andrea!
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 1:28 AM
Adorably sweet! I remember those sweet butterflies, thank you for sharing :)
Canerdy Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 6:54 AM
Andrea, your movingly descriptive poem addresses a fact of life~~and hot romance! Janice
Buhagiar Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 1:08 AM
Dear Andrea, I still cannot fathom what this contest is all about. Your poem is so delicate, mine is a nightmare. Whatever best for a win.
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 9:15 AM
I honestly couldn't think what my dream within a dream could be until I thought of this. . I always go back to romance
George Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 11:14 PM
Dreams are like butterflies, beautiful but fleeting. A lovely poem. All the best, dear Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 9:16 AM
Exactly. Thank you
Goldsmith Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 11:03 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great Picture... Wish I had this pretty picture. Great Ending Here... "Good Luck" I also did this one. Have a Blessed day writing away..........
Narain Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 10:56 AM
A poem with beautiful imagery. Like it.
Grasso Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 6:02 AM
You have captured the essence of young love beautifully in this sweet poem, Andreda...as I desperately search through past dreams for a fragment or two of those fires. Lovely poem! ...Fran
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 9:16 AM
Thanks, Francis
Rolland Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 5:55 PM
sympathy for butterflies, your dreams are cool and so sweet enjoyed
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 5:11 PM
beautiful imagery and breathtaking words. Truly evocative poem...a fabulous contest entry!
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