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I've dreamed of something special for quite some time, a vacation I've envisioned that would be simply sublime. I'll be leaving from Miami on a round-the-world cruise and I reserved a balcony room to enjoy the scenic views. I'll sail upon many seas, those both far away and near because my dream vacation will last for an entire year! Each morning l will awaken in a harbor I've never seen, starting in the Caribbean Sea and its waters, aquamarine. Visiting St. Thomas, I'll swim in waters of Megan's Bay, sipping Bahama Mamas, then I'll dance the night away. The Atlantic will take a few days to cross, but that's fine. Each night will be a tasty feast and the most divine wine. I'll think of Casablanca as I dock on Moroccan shores, heading out for the sights and sounds on several tours. Through Gibraltar's Strait, into the Mediterranean Sea. How I dream of stopping at Marseille, and on to Sicily. For ancient cities filled with treasures of Grecian urns. My heart longs to walk among ruins, oh how it yearns. To sail along in the wake of Odysseus would be great, if only this dream could come true, I'd revel in my fate. Sail the coast of Africa, around the Cape of Good Hope. Everything is wonderful! No regrets or reason to mope. Ahead lies the Indian Ocean and then the Arabian Sea. Paradise is straight ahead. There's no turning back for me. Several days spent in the Sunda Islands, Sumatra... Borneo So many exotic places to visit where lush rain forests grow. I could've stayed another week or two, but the sea calls me. Australia, New Zealand and New Guinea, in the Tasman Sea. On to Far Eastern regions where cherry blossoms bloom. I'll have tea, wearing a lovely Japanese kimono costume. That's as far North on this adventure that my ship will go. Twelve months are passing by. I wish the time would slow. My dream will continue as I head back to my U. S. home and next year I will dream of new lands where I must roam. I'm planning to see the fjords and wavering Northern Lights, Canada and Iceland where I'll climb to mountainous heights. On a South American journey, from my balcony I'll be toasting, looking forward to a luau. eating poi and pork that was roasting. In the Hawaiian Isles I'll learn to move my hips in a Hula dance. Perhaps my dream vacation will find me having a new romance. March 28, 2022 My Dream Vacation Contest Sponsored by: Milt Hankins

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Date: 4/4/2022 1:20:00 PM
Back with congratulations Jenna, when do we sail? Tom
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Date: 4/4/2022 11:21:00 AM
Hi Jenna, just swinging back around to say how happy I am that your poetic prowess has been acknowledged with a trophy. My sincere congratulations to you and my heartfelt encouragement to keep writing and sharing... so many benefit from your talents ~ John
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Date: 4/3/2022 5:57:00 AM
Brilliant dreams, Jenna, congratulations:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/3/2022 6:01:00 AM
Thanks a bunch, Jo.
Date: 4/3/2022 3:21:00 AM
Superb piece! I pray that your dream vacation will come true. Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! Hugs
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/3/2022 6:01:00 AM
Thanks, Len, but I seriously doubt it at this point in my life. I've not the time or money to take off for a year. Nice thought, though.
Date: 4/2/2022 8:41:00 AM
Difficult, if not impossible to beat, a round the world cruise as a vacation! So beautifully portrayed, congrats on your win Jenna and wish your dream comes true!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/2/2022 8:48:00 AM
Wouldn't that be a wondrous year? Thanks for the kind comments and congrats, Seeker.
Date: 4/2/2022 3:45:00 AM
This is stunning, Congrats and God Bless you. Love, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/2/2022 8:47:00 AM
Thank you for such kind thoughts, Gina.
Date: 4/2/2022 3:17:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! It's my prayer that the Lord will grant your dream vacation... God bless you.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/2/2022 8:47:00 AM
The Lord is much too busy with serious needs of people to grant anyone a vacation, but thanks for the congrats.
Date: 4/1/2022 2:40:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your first place trophy win with your wonderfully penned dream vacation poem!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/2/2022 8:46:00 AM
A bit of an extravagant dream, but you must come along, Tania. Dreams are free! Thanks.
Date: 4/1/2022 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a great write. Sounds like a wonderful trip. Can I go??? hahahah Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.........................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/2/2022 8:45:00 AM
Yes, of course you may come along. What fun it would be. Thanks, Paula.
Date: 4/1/2022 9:23:00 AM
Wow! South America. Best of luck. Beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/2/2022 8:45:00 AM
Thanks so much, Chris.
Date: 4/1/2022 7:48:00 AM
Wow! congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest! Fabulous, what a terrific travel log....you brought us all there too! :)Paulette
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/1/2022 8:26:00 AM
Thanks, Paulette. I'm delighted to have had your company. Let's do it again the next year.
Date: 4/1/2022 7:43:00 AM
Wow! So, your dream vacation scored big with me, Jenna. Congratulations on your trophy win in my contest. I was so pleasantly surprised to see your name at the top of the list! Well-earned, I must add, too.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/1/2022 8:24:00 AM
Oh, Milt, thank you! I was gone for some time and didn't know if I'd return in time to write for your contest, so I'm really happy you found it winner worthy. Thanks so very much. Hugs.
Date: 3/30/2022 10:57:00 AM
Jenna, I see you dream big! I would love to do something of this ilk, as I have done very little international traveling in my life. Love your poem, especially your creative rhyming... if you ever get to enjoy this dream trip, be sure to bring your pen and notebook so we can read all about your exotic escapades ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/1/2022 8:23:00 AM
Hi John, and thanks so much for enjoying my dream vacation. It costs nothing to dream about the places I'd go, things I'd do, and the sights I'd see. I would love to make this a reality, but who's got the time or money for an indulgence of this kind? One day... Thank you.
Date: 3/29/2022 11:41:00 AM
Try learning hula in Tahiti! EVER so much nicer! Bon voyage! Aloha!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/31/2022 11:09:00 AM
As may be gleaned from the Merry Monarch Festival, Hawaiian hula is like a Mormon fashion show, choreographed in Christian 3's instead of native 4's, but one can still hula in Tahiti, etc. Aloha!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 12:29:00 PM
I shall add it to my list for next year. I've already been to the Hawaiian Islands. Thanks, Rico.
Date: 3/29/2022 4:44:00 AM
Jenna, I'm so impressed by the imagery of your dream itinerary! Your rhyme and flow are so pleasantly constructed and fun to read as my mind wanders into each destination!! Love this! Good luck and Happy Tuesday xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:24:00 AM
Mike, thanks for such glowing comments. I hear there are still some balcony suites available!
Date: 3/28/2022 3:52:00 PM
Sounds an amazing voyage Jenna, If you need someone to carry your bags, I'm your man. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 3:40:00 AM
It really does, Tom. The only bags you'll carry is to a suite next to mine. Come along.
Date: 3/28/2022 1:10:00 PM
In your next dream, don't forget to take a trip to Brazil. Let's eat feijoada, drink cachaça and jump on Carnival!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 3:39:00 AM
I'm there. Thanks, Marco.
Date: 3/28/2022 1:01:00 PM
wow Jenna may all your dreams come true, this is an amazing journey indeed:-) hugs Jan xx
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