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My Dream of Heaven

For You, Dad - Heaven shines, stunning me with God’s glory, and dreams of your song. Glimpses of your face come to me; my soul fills with the story of our Savior’s love, and I walk in grace, love pouring from the source, a joyous place. Then, I wake to the stress of day and strain to hear your drumstick’s sweet rhythm again, listening for angels to shout amen. Still, the warmth of my memories remain, so 'til I see you, I’ll dream of Heaven.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/15/2015 10:42:00 AM
Hi Rhonda ~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*
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Date: 2/6/2015 10:44:00 PM
I just loved this one, for how you made it so personal, Rhonda. A lovely poem that really deserved this great win Congratulations. forgot to tell you before: Loved the part about the drumsticks.
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Date: 2/5/2015 7:37:00 AM
A lovely tribute to your Father RHonda.. we all hope this that one day our love ones who went before us we'll meet them again in heaven.. :)! amen. :) .. Thanks much for helping my with the syllable count.. :)! God bless us always..//olive eloisa
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:56:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, stopping back to congratulate you on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem, Rhonda, a 7 on this beautiful spiritual write. Eve
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:30:00 AM
Hi Rhonda Congrats on win>love>rajat
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:12:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win... nad!
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Date: 2/3/2015 6:35:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2015 6:01:00 AM
I've similar thoughts about my own dad, he was a special person to many whom he served and extra special to me his namesake. Thanks for sparking my memories of him again.
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:20:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Rhonda
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Date: 1/23/2015 3:44:00 PM
Truly exceptional tribute to your father. First word, last word and everything in between is inspiring and uplifting to the soul! A very , very solid 7.. A pleasure to read and see faith in action!
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Date: 1/22/2015 11:57:00 PM
a most heavenly dream and a poem sure to please this judge. Well, I sure hope so. You do dizain beautifully.
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Date: 1/22/2015 6:53:00 PM
Very beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your father, Rhonda. I can tell you are a woman of faith.
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Date: 1/22/2015 5:22:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, I see you really got inspired after all! Such a lovely tribute to your Dad and a statement of strong faith! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/22/2015 12:07:00 PM
A well written and touching dedication... a parent always watch over there young ones no matter where they are... lov, nad
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Date: 1/22/2015 9:32:00 AM
What a lovely dedication poem, I'm sure your dad is smiling down on you.
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Date: 1/22/2015 8:38:00 AM
An ethereal walk through a memory filled with sadness and love as time measures the journey in the mind of the author. The soul is a song and thus unaffected by time which can only change the words but fails to alter the tune that remains in harmony with life and God. Emile #7
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Date: 1/22/2015 5:22:00 AM
- What a beautiful poem to your beloved father,dear Rhonda - His soul is with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/22/2015 2:14:00 AM
This is such a lovely tribute to your dad who you must miss so much - I am sure you will meet again one day - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx A 7 from me
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