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My dream girl

Held by an angel like a tender tool rubs gently on my skin like a soft wool she’s just her own type her smile now my skype as I blindly enjoy being a big fool.

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Date: 7/1/2017 6:20:00 AM
Sweet tender girl and equally cute write
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/3/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thank you very much Anand
Date: 6/30/2017 9:31:00 PM
It's fantasy at work . well written.This is the first one I read I'm eager to read more.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/3/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Bawa, please do read more
Date: 6/20/2017 4:00:00 PM
My Main Man Funom For a dream girl Id gladly enjoy being a fool all day everyday Great Work
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/3/2017 8:33:00 AM
hahahahahaha... Yeah right! Thank you so much for the sweet comment Christopher
Date: 6/20/2017 3:38:00 AM
Nicely done....
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Date: 6/18/2017 7:53:00 AM
Nice Limerick, Funom:)
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/3/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Jo
Date: 6/17/2017 8:17:00 PM
She does indeed sound like a skype angel Funom~hope it works out for you both my friend! Very nice love write!~Che :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/3/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Cheryl
Date: 6/17/2017 2:06:00 PM
Funom, I can tell that you are in love.I have enjoyed your poem.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/3/2017 8:32:00 AM
yes... I am so in love. Thank you so much Darlene
Date: 6/17/2017 10:28:00 AM
Reminds me of the song "Everybody Plays the Fool"! Point well made with this brief form, Funom! Janice
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/3/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Janice
Date: 6/17/2017 10:12:00 AM
Many superb images!
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/3/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim