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My Dream Date

I was only seventeen standing outside of the library, when he walked by. Tall as the sky, with waves of thick brown hair to match his eyes. As my face turned beet red, I almost melted into the ground. That night as my head sank into my soft pillow, dreamland was on it's way. A new dress I did wear as I opened the front door, he was wearing a huge smile with red sneaks and not much more. With flowers and candy in hand, he said for you enjoy sweet thing. A magical moment it was, he had taken my breath away. Off in his little candy red vet, we did fly. Dinner and dancing was on the menu under the sky, the night would be over way too soon. Back at my front door, he leaned over for a big juicy kiss. Now I wake up kissing my feather pillow, oh no~boohoo once more. Date Written: 1/25/2023 2 Place Note: This Is just a write.........

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/22/2023 11:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your podium win, Paula. Lovely romantic poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 3:02:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad to enjoyed this romantic write. It was not true, just a fun write. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Valsa George

Date: 2/21/2023 9:29:00 PM

Such a romantic experience ! I can picture the whole scene in my mind. Your meeting with him and your ride together for an evening out and finally his parting kiss.... Well written, dear Paula. Congratulations on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 3:01:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad to enjoyed this write. It was not true, just a write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/21/2023 12:52:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your contest win, Paula. Wish you the best always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 3:00:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad to see you back. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/26/2023 8:16:00 PM

So romantical and sweet! Innocent times!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 8:21:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my dream date write. This was Not true just a Fun write. Guess my crazy side was showing. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............

Michael Tor

Date: 1/26/2023 5:31:00 PM

You can't get in trouble if your dreaming. Enjoyed this one Paula. your passionet side revealed...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 8:19:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this fun/cute dream date write. This was so much fun to write. Guess my crazy side was showing. You are so right, no trouble in dreaming. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2023 4:56:00 PM

It may be 'just a write,' but woohoo! we can dream, can't we?!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 8:15:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this creative dream date write. Yes, dreams can get carried away. I like the fun dreams. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/25/2023 5:53:00 PM

Oh, this is so good, Paula. I could feel every word.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 8:13:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you could feel every word and enjoyed this cute dream date write. It was a joy to write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............

Clifford Villalon

Date: 1/25/2023 3:30:00 PM

This is an enchanting dream Miss Paula. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 8:09:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this fun dream date write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............