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My Demon Was Hungry

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Hi readers, this poem has nothing to do with myself. It is a fiction trying to relate what it must feel like to have a guilt with someone or something. Hope you enjoy.

My demon was hungry When it devoured all I’d built. It happily used a solid, rusted blade To clot my blistered guilt. Guilt for what I didn’t say, For things I didn’t do. It left deranged, irrational scars, Reminding me of you. This demon left me black, An empty nothing full of pain, Pain which exists when I wake And relive it all again. And all I own are echoed aches After my demon fed. Now, “Defeat” is all I can hear, Each time I'm in my head.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/1/2017 7:31:00 PM
You wrote it well I think! (He/she needs to let those demons go now :) to get that word out of their head)
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 6/1/2017 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Lenna, some folks have a hard time letting it go I think.
Date: 6/1/2017 2:34:00 AM
Such a heart felt poem Lewis! I really liked it
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Date: 6/1/2017 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Kudzai

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