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My Day Out

My day out I am going for a car ride Maybe he will take me to get some trout Oh boy I will not be inside I am going for a car ride With the wind in my fur I was so happy I almost cried If I was a cat I think I would purr With the wind in my fur I needed glasses to see My car ride has become a blur Now I need to pee We just passed a park Do I need to shout Maybe I needed to bark My day out Date Written: 5/16/2020 Picture Number 2

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/9/2020 1:59:00 PM

Totally dee- lightful. Panagiota

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/9/2020 2:10:00 PM

So glad you like it. Thanks for your note. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Ann Foster

Date: 5/25/2020 2:58:00 PM

This was cute. I loved it. Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2020 5:25:00 PM

So glad you loved it. Thanks for your note. Have a great day and week.................

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/17/2020 8:58:00 AM

Hello Paula, Your theme here for "My Day Out" is quite interesting. I see how you were able to convey your thoughts very effectively here in the Pantoum poetic format. Very well-done and quite effective in portraying your subject theme to the reader. Enjoyed it!! Best Always, Gary

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/17/2020 1:15:00 PM

Thank You, for your kind words with your note. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day...... Reply