My Dancing Queen

My old bones swayed to the old tune
bringing back memories long forgotten.
My spirit rejoiced in exultation
of a ne'er forgotten loving excitation.
For you’re my Dancing Queen.....
 
There you stood like a wallflower,
indifferent, lukewarm, nonchalant;
seemingly thinking about other things.
You drove me mad, my dancing queen,
you taunted me perilously, wretchedly.
How could I ever bear the teasing looks
you guardedly gave me, my lovely nymph?
 
I was dancing with some insipid teen,
definitely not having the time of my life;
my loving eyes piercing your sensuous curves
like Eros arrows hitting at random and at will.
Yet you looked on as if I was not there.
The music grew to a raw crescendo....
For you were my dancing queen
and suddenly I was madly in love with you.
 
I twirled, spun and tripped over you.
The music stopped, dancers gazed at me
with a heartfelt pang as I lay sprawled at your feet.
A racking malaise stabbed my whole being
until I felt your strong hands help me up
steadying me, and leading me to a chair.
And you were only nineteen!!!
The music began again, the old familiar strains
How nimble you could dance,
Oh how I yearn for that sweet moment
For you were my dancing queen......
You danced away while I stayed put
as my foot swelled with excruciating pain.
The euphoric dance came to a halt. 
 
The lights went low.
You helped me to your waiting car.
I leant back, tired and abject
Until I felt your lips on mine;
the heavenly music began again...
yes, yes you’re my dancing queen,
you will always be my dancing queen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ricci Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Victor Victor Victor. Wow. How beautiful and emotional is this entry and your words. Very. Through your clear thoughts and feelings the reader is drawn to your words and reflections. Simply Victor this is beautiful in every way. May today be a good day and show you everything good as well. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile)
Rose  Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 5:19 PM
You make me want to polish off my shoes too, lol, beautiful sentimental and soft, just like I like them Victor :)
Edmonds  Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Lovely memories of your dancing queen, when you meet again on heaven’s shore your queen will dance just for you for evermore… Belle
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 12:39 PM
Woah what a marvelous story of you meeting your love dancing queen. You wrote the story so poetically seamlessly in a fab engaging way . I loved this poem's romantic sweetness. Kudos!!  >>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<< Plz also read and comment my newest poem
George Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 5:59 AM
What an astounding piece. Dear Victor, you are indeed a Romeo still ! Probably Romeo and Juliet might not have loved so passionately ! I could visualize the dancing floor where your queen gyrated in rhythmic steps and your greedy eyes focussing only on her. Lovely !
Roper Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 7:55 PM
Wonderful romantic verse, deep feelings of love. hugs my friend
Eslinger Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 2:55 PM
Victor! My man! I’m trying a return from the near-dead & come to read this ASTOUNDING work of yours. A tour de force narrative. Don’t know how you’re doing it, but your poems keep topping one another! Fresh approach! Heartfelt! Sexy! Superb telling! Maybe i could share some of that wine? Bravo! Hugs, sally
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Stepping back in time to the euphoric dance of youth! Hugs ~ Kim
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 1:16 PM
wow, so romantic. What a great story teller you are, Victor.
Buehler Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 10:42 AM
I enjoyed this sweet tale of love's triumph, Victor. How lovely that she danced right into his arms! This is a fave. :)
Hawley Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 10:38 AM
Nice little romantic moment of story telling.
Anaya Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 10:34 AM
dance makes life a little more special, a hint of humor in your poem, maybe a touch of noir? You took me to ABBA's "Dancing Queen" we all loved it and danced away to it.
Poet Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 10:19 AM
Your ability to captivate your readers is impressive, in this romantic tale.
Peck Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 8:30 AM
A beautiful poem, Victor. It honors the song Dancing Queen. Best of luck!
Cunningham Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 6:58 AM
Quite a romantic verse that is your trademark Victor. With trapped nerves my dancing days are over. Tom
Kannan Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 6:13 AM
How romantic!!! You know to impress your readers and your romantic verses are the bestest I have ever read.... Loved it...
Pandit Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Isn't it sweet when the story ends so beautifully in the arms of a dancing queen. Very romantic tale, Victor.
Daniel Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Lovely and so romantic, Victor:) beautiful description, I was almost transported to the dance:)
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 2:59 AM
- How beautiful and romantic, Victor ... vividly described ... as I was a spectator in the background :) - hugs
Seeker Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 2:08 AM
The saga of Victor the romantic continues!
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