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My Cute Cat Tiddles

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Cute Tiddles how she loves to play She chases toy mice ev’ry day Her furry clockwork mouse She pats it round the house If alive there’d be hell to pay! She guzzles cool milk from her dish then gobbles up smelly white fish Puss is growing so fast - Kitten hood doesn’t last I delight to watch her flourish She doesn’t need any invite To clamber on my lap each night I can hear her loud purr As I stroke her gray fur My Tiddles is such a delight! FICTION POEM Cat Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 8/9/18

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Jack Horne

Date: 8/18/2018 11:07:00 AM

awww, sounds such a cutie

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/13/2018 8:19:00 PM

G'day Jan … well written Jan on a subject loved by many. Unfortunately down here, feral cats are public enemy number one and if your pet cat isn't confined it can be quickly impounded - thank you Jan - Lindsay

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/13/2018 3:09:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Delightful! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/12/2018 10:47:00 PM

Magnificent write, Jan, congratulations on you great win! Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/12/2018 6:13:00 PM

Ahh!! You must have had some experience with cats to be so familiar with them ...Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 8/12/2018 3:42:00 PM

Congrats for your well-deserved win for this beauty Jan. I have a dear old cat named Jeff and he is lying on the desk as I type this - a wonderful companion!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2018 6:14:00 PM

Thanks so much Bob - so wonderful to see you back on soup, thinking of you my friend and I agree a pet is a wonderful companion:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/12/2018 11:59:00 AM

I am happy to see this adorable poem in First place Jan. Congratulations on your deserving win! : ) xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2018 1:42:00 PM

Thanks Connie I am slowly getting round to a bit of soup time and have just posted a blog as the collaboration poem got POTW! I'm having a great time with hubby and son:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/12/2018 9:40:00 AM

Lovely poem, Jan. Congrats on your gold medal win.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2018 9:44:00 AM

Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/12/2018 5:58:00 AM

Congrats on your top win! So cute!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2018 9:44:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Greg Gaul

Date: 8/12/2018 5:49:00 AM

Who could not love Tiddles? Even the name! Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2018 5:51:00 AM

Thanks so much Greg:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 8/12/2018 5:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan with your delightful limericks, I am a cat lover, such a shame you’re allergic they are beautiful creatures, well written my friend. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2018 5:35:00 AM

We used to have a cat when I was growing up but it became evident I have an allergy to the dander in their fur. I am ok with some cats but have a horrible reaction to others:-( hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/12/2018 4:22:00 AM

Very fun limerick Jan, congratulations on your first place win.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2018 4:30:00 AM

Oh wow thanks Tania I am absolutely delighted to place so well!!:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/11/2018 1:03:00 AM

If you love this fictional cat this much, Jan, you're going to have to get a real one! Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2018 7:11:00 AM

I'd love one Mr Viv but I have an allergy to their fur and they are such a tie:-( hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/10/2018 8:48:00 PM

Absolutely love the name and your cute lim dear sis!!! A winner... no contest!!! Lovesies, Happy Jack XOX

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2018 7:11:00 AM

Thanks Jack:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2018 6:02:00 PM

This made me think of the catfood Tibbles and Bits. But change the middle consonant to D. Very cute , Jan. How is your day going?

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2018 7:10:00 AM

I don't know that brand not one we have in the Uk - that said I don't have a cat so it may be here!:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/10/2018 4:40:00 PM

Cats are the best. I love and miss having a cat now after our kind Kitty passed away a few years ago. An adorable poem and entry Jan! : )

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2018 7:09:00 AM

Thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/9/2018 9:16:00 PM

Too bad Tiddles piddles, isn't it? Bonne chance! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2018 3:27:00 AM

I stayed away from writing about the litter tray lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 8/9/2018 6:01:00 PM

This is so adorable. I hope Tiddles doesn't piddle in the house. ha I know it's a work of fiction.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2018 6:17:00 PM

LOl Lin I toyed with doing a verse about a litter tray ... then thought better of it lol:-) hugs jan xx

Warren Doll

Date: 8/9/2018 4:44:00 PM

Wonderful limerick, Jan. You have a true understanding of feline behavior./ Warren :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2018 6:16:00 PM

I wish I could have a cat, then again having a pet is such a tie:-( hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/9/2018 4:31:00 PM

Very cute verse Jan , surprised it was fiction. Have had cats in the past, they're very independent and fussy creatures. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2018 6:16:00 PM

We had a family cat when I was growing up but it was evident I had an allergy:-( hugs Jan xx