My Comfort and Delight

They sit and sit; they don’t get fat
like you or me if we did that!
Two kitties which are cute and fit.
They don’t get fat; they sit and sit.

One cat is white with eyes of blue -
I do not often hear him mew
except if hungry or at night.
With eyes of blue, one cat is white.

The ginger one with yellow eyes
wears stripes. A tiger in disguise?
Just watching him is so much fun -
with yellow eyes – the ginger one.

With one another both cats play.
My comfort and delight are they.
Each seems like the other’s brother.
Both cats play with one another.

Each comes to me in his own time.
To hear them purring is sublime.
I pet them, and it brings me glee.
In his own time, each comes to me.

Sept. 9, 2022 
for Emile Pinet's Swap Quatrain Poetry Contest
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Watt Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 10:29 PM
A cute little swap quatrain about your cute little kitties. Congrats on winning with this one in Emile's contest.
Kauffman Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 12:57 PM
Wonderful feline lines Andrea! Your kitties are such wonderful companions and inspiration for you! Congratulations on your win!
Seeker Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Oozing charm and delight! Love this! Your win was inevitable, warmest congratulations!
Volumes Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 5:38 PM
I don't like cats much, but I love your poem. Your two sound rather special, maybe cats like yours could change my mind, Andrea. Your poem is a worthy winner.
La France Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 3:55 PM
Andrea, sweet poem and congratulations on your win in Emile's contest, blessings
Kerr Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 3:02 PM
Andrea, Such a charming and utterly beguiling piece. Congratulations. Thank you as always for your reflections on Hithhiker. Howard
Fowler Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 2:13 PM
Back with huge congrats on your win Andrea! :)
Pinet Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your poem earned you a distinguished place in my contest. This form is very challenging and tough to judge, but your poem made my list, very well done my friend, Emile.
Fowler Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 7:51 AM
Beautifully done Andrea! So sweet! :) Linda
Baker Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 7:35 AM
A FAV for my list, Andrea. WOW! lovely write my friend. I really liked the way you reversed the phrases in the first and last line of each verse. Excellante!!! This one has Winner written all over it. Hugs, Bill
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September 11, 2022 at 3:38 AM
I bet my bottom dollar that this poem is a top win. I so enjoyed it and really miss having a pet, not allowed in the estate we bought in, want to sell because of that. Enjoy them, they sound adorable, love and hugs, Jennifer.
Walker Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 7:30 PM
Love your cats through your poetry of them. You make me wish I had a cat..
Sangster - K Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 5:31 AM
This was a delightful read for me this morning. I love cats and have one of my own. Their purring is so comforting. Cheers my friend :-)
Goff Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 5:05 AM
Such a fun poem Andrea! Brightened my day!
M  Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 8:51 PM
Such a sweet relatable poem Andrea…I understand that comfort and joy you get from your beloved pets. I hope you are ok and your husband is doing better. Cheers Debx
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