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Of the Gods own country of this paradise where green and blue merge as one in the north is a city that encompass the beauty where the dream lands meet lined by kaasaraka trees where seven tongues are spoken and a unique lingo was woken lined by shores and calm beaches which meets with forts of ancient elegance who can pass by with no notice the mountains high and hillocks of beauty forests green and tranquil rivers places of worship, unique structures renowned for coir and handloom and for its customs varied The people here, with a smile of warmth welcoming with open arms known for their variety dishes which does prick ones tastebuds of the sense of fashion who can beat their passion and their thirst for knowledge is to be acknowledged fame it has know from times of yore of the arts and culture it beholds this is the city of budding talents feel the vibe and do relent © Nadiya(14 May '15)
*Chosen poem of the day on 16 May 2015

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Date: 5/9/2016 4:11:00 PM
This is wonderful!! SO very lovely.. :) :)
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:14:00 AM
I enjoy reading this poem very much!! Great pen! :)
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Date: 6/4/2015 12:23:00 AM
captivating beautiful pen nadiya congratulations on poem of the day sorry i never read sooner not been on site much recently
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:39:00 PM
thank you liam..
Date: 5/17/2015 6:54:00 PM
Nad, this sounds terrific.. Speaking of which, congrats on Poem Of The Day!
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:40:00 PM
thank you Dave
Date: 5/17/2015 6:04:00 PM
Hi Nadiya, stopping back to congratulate you for your poem being chased Poem of the Day! Was away from my computer, and just saw it today! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:40:00 PM
thank you Sandra
Date: 5/17/2015 5:39:00 AM
Hello Nadiya!! I was away yesterday and missed the news here of your POTD recognition. Congratulations on POTD!! -- and for a job very well-done with this free verse write on "My City," which is a quite intriguing write. It makes me think of some cities I've visited in my past travels. A "7" of course!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:40:00 PM
thank you Gary...
Date: 5/16/2015 6:03:00 PM
There seems to be so much to love, enjoy and appreciate in your precious city in every nook and cranny. Every city must have nooks and crannies. Do you know what I love about your poem? It is your display of how much you love your city. Bye for now. Jim Horn
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:41:00 PM
thank you James
Date: 5/16/2015 3:32:00 PM
Congrats, dear, on your poem being chosen as POTD. Lovely description of your city. It awakens the sense of adventure.
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:41:00 PM
thanks Eileen
Date: 5/16/2015 12:25:00 PM
What a wonderful place -- the color, various dialects, aromas merge to create a nirvana -- such are the words you write! Congrats on this wonderful poem.
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:42:00 PM
thank you David
Date: 5/16/2015 9:05:00 AM
Beautiful city, a 7 and congratulations on Poem Of The Day
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:42:00 PM
thank you eve
Date: 5/16/2015 7:39:00 AM
I have heard many times how a person called another person's description of their home as God's own country..Way to go with that idea..Congrats on being selected to be poem of the day..Sara
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:42:00 PM
thank you Sara
Date: 5/16/2015 6:18:00 AM
Brilliant to see it as Poem of the day congrats Nadiya:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:39:00 PM
thank you Jan... lov, nad
Date: 5/16/2015 5:33:00 AM
This is SO lovely!! India is such an amazing country.. :D :D Congratulations!! :D :D
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Date: 5/16/2015 5:37:00 AM
I know right :D... Thank you Sneha..
Date: 5/16/2015 5:23:00 AM
- Back with congrats !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/16/2015 5:32:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise
Date: 5/16/2015 5:17:00 AM
Glad that a favorite of mine is chosen as POTD. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/16/2015 5:34:00 AM
Thank you very much Becca... glad you liked my poem Becca... yes I do love my city and miss the place... nad
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Date: 5/16/2015 5:32:00 AM
Thank you Nandita
Date: 5/15/2015 2:32:00 AM
- A pleasure to read your warm and loving words about your home country - "The people here, with a smile of warmth welcoming with open arms "..... - I want to come with the first flight to your city in India - I wish you a beautiful day, Nad and you get a 7 from me :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/15/2015 3:20:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise.. Please do visit if and when you get a chance to:) ... wish you a great day .. hugs nad
Date: 5/14/2015 10:54:00 PM
Kerala is indeed God's own country. A paradise on earth. How I love the food, culture and the people...Excellent write. 7. A fav.
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Date: 5/15/2015 3:22:00 AM
Thank you Nandita... I love my place as well n Casuarina Tree is one of my fav poems ... glad you like my pen,.... nad!
Date: 5/14/2015 6:27:00 PM
Such a grand place you describe, Posey. You painted it so well with your poetic words. I enjoyed read it. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/15/2015 3:21:00 AM
Thank you Sandra... glad you liked my write... have a nice day.. hugs, nad
Date: 5/14/2015 2:16:00 PM
oh Posey your country sounds so so wonderful - such incredible imagery - and the people sound so welcoming:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 5/15/2015 3:23:00 AM
Thank you dear friend... I feel good to have written this, I did this upon the request of some other... glad you enjoyed... hugs, nad