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My Childhood Pathways

Oh, that magical age of 5 -that long-ago time when memory sharpens and events recalled get compartmentalized into something more than mere wisps of mist! Infancy’s vast fog lifts! My own childhood more vividly recalled began with a country lane which took my younger sisters and me away from grandpa’s yellow house past berry bushes and rows upon rows of corn; how happily we meandered. A year passed. Away from Grandpa’s farm, I got to know new pathways. These were the streets of my new home city, where my mother remarried. I walked a labyrinth of new streets, alongside new siblings as well! In winter’s frigid cold, I’d trudge the many blocks to school and back. In summer’s heat, my many siblings and I would traipse three mile just to relish swimming at the pool, licking ice cream cones on our way home. Poor - but not in spirit - we walked and walked and walked. . . My 13th year, I walked all my city’s streets selling Christmas cards in summer. Boils festered on my arms, but I was determined to cover all my town. That fall, I bought myself a purple bike with the money I had saved. Another magical year it was! As my life picked up speed, I left my childhood behind - pedaling up grueling hills, then racing gleefully down them. Nov. 28, 2018

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Date: 12/16/2018 1:45:00 PM
Sounds like you learned a lot from the paths you took, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/15/2018 2:55:00 PM
Andrea, Just stopping back with congratulations on your win in Craig's contest! Sending wishes for holiday cheer, Carolyn
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Date: 12/15/2018 10:49:00 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Craig's "My Youth" contest, Andrea - blessings and best wishes to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! Keep the wonderful ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 11/30/2018 6:18:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. Awesome that you bought your own bike with money you earned. You had the pluck. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/29/2018 6:15:00 PM
Andrea, loved your childhood poem, what a wonderful little girl you were, best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 11/29/2018 4:32:00 PM
I agree with Carolyn, Andrea, love to read anything about you, and the mentality that creates such beautiful poetry.
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Date: 11/29/2018 11:23:00 AM
I love the way the reader gets to know you in this poem, Andrea. Your childhood memories are depicted with grace and style. A beautiful write, dear friend! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/29/2018 10:17:00 AM
Another excellent write... I really enjoyed the way you wrote this. A very charming and nostalgic poem! ;)
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Date: 11/29/2018 9:20:00 AM
cleverly written, my friend - loved trying your Andaree form for Emile's contest, by the way
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Date: 11/29/2018 7:35:00 AM
You may have had it hard along the way but special in every way...A nice write...I like it...All the best Andrea
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Date: 11/29/2018 6:03:00 AM
WOW! A simple, yet powerful depiction..there is much happiness of childhood and yet tones of melancholy. Your poem evokes... makes me stop and think of my childhood. Well written, as always, Andrea.
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Date: 11/29/2018 1:53:00 AM
I'm enjoying your stories down memory lane Andrea. Tom
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