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My Carpet Ride

The Arabian flying carpet knocked me off my feet. I was bent over sideways with a feeling of defeat. Yelled a bystander, “Is that a flying carpet? It is sweet!” I took out my giant bag of munchies, great things to eat. Hey, said my travel mate, foxy fox, are those cupcakes wheat? I was amazed he noticed in middle of super long tweet. We rode over through six continents a tour that could not be beat So, I was thrilled the aggressive carpet had knocked me off my feet.

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Date: 11/20/2021 12:56:00 AM
Fun ride you had, Caren, great imagination:)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/20/2021 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Jo. I am so good at entertaining myself, it should be embarrassing.