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Christmas is over; everyone's looking forward to a new year, except for an unfortunate few who have no family. For them, there are no bells of celebration to ring in the New Year. They sleep in dirty blankets atop steam vents to keep warm. I can't even imagine being them; it's hard to fathom the nightmares haunting their meager existence; invisible in plain sight. The cold seeps into their bones, crushing their spirits. They're homeless human dregs, the byproduct of modern cities. Facing rejection and scorn, they preserve their dignity in alcohol; trying to stay numb. For the lost, hope is a luxury they can't afford; winter's the death knell for the mentally sick on the streets. To lose who you are as a person is both devastating and cruel; what was their crime? Humanity includes all souls such as these at its fringes. When I look into their eyes, I don't see a weight on society, I see the same hopes, dreams, and fears that I see in myself, and it makes me want to cry! Are we so different that we can justify their hurt and humiliation? Is our lack of pity because we're immune to the pain confronting us, or is it because, like Cain, we are not "my brother's keeper?" Perhaps it's a little of both!

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Date: 5/5/2018 9:43:00 PM
Loved these lines "Invisible in plain sight", "the byproduct of modern cities", "they preserve their dignity in alcohol". Belated congrats on your fine win, Emile.
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Date: 5/6/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/13/2018 4:04:00 PM
Such an emotional, sadly beautiful and heartbreaking poem you've penned Emile. You give a powerful and poignant voice to the plight of the homeless. Your fourth stanza was especially moving and stirred my soul in a very mournful way. Your brilliant write sheds a bright light on this somber topic. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes ~Susan P.S. a great title as well..
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Date: 1/13/2018 5:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Susan, I truly appreciate this in depth review, you possess a kind soul and it manifest itself in your writings my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/13/2018 4:03:00 AM
nothing sadder than being homeless on cold nights, great poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/13/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate the opportunity to participate in your contest my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/4/2018 1:17:00 PM
This is a really intriguing subject. Definitely one to ponder on. “Hope’s a luxury, they just can’t afford.” Brilliant!
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Date: 1/5/2018 11:24:00 AM
Thanks Anna, your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.

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