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My Boy In the Rain

He stood near the window pane Watching the rain... I wanted to stand out there, With no wet hair, The rainbow beckoned to me, Said, "Come and see", My mom's umbrella I took, And went to look. He climbed the slippery bench, Half dry, half drenched... I reached towards that sky bow, Colourful glow, Water only I could touch, I tried so much, Then watched the colours seven, Up in heaven. He clutched tight my umbrella, Naughty fella... How I wish they could have stayed! Look, now they fade, My mom's calling me inside, Where can I hide? This umbrella will hide me, Now, she can't see. My innocent little boy, Let him enjoy. 09/28/17

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Date: 6/3/2021 6:48:00 PM
Dear Jo, it was a pleasure to return to this charming poem once again. Enchanting beauty spills from your lovely pen. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Juliet's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/23/2021 7:09:00 PM
Thanks for entering your original poem, Jo. I like your creative narration between the poem. This was a difficult contest to judge. Keep up the creativity.
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Date: 11/10/2017 10:01:00 AM
Such a beautiful written poem it is, well it s natural every single child likes to get wet in rain and the scene of rainbow is so awesome, you ve explained everything beautifully, it really was a wonderful poem and yeah thanks for reading my poem as well, I really appreciate it
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Date: 10/19/2017 8:06:00 AM
What a heart enduring poem my friend. Both mother and son were and are surely blessed. A fav...
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Date: 10/7/2017 12:45:00 AM
Jo - Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - wonderful work! :-)
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Date: 10/6/2017 7:08:00 PM
Jo, congratulations on your win with this beautifully penned and delightful write !
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Date: 10/6/2017 6:31:00 PM
Wonderful write Jo..Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/6/2017 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jo , you captured the child feelings , thank you … I love what you did with the picture <3 Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/28/2017 8:44:00 PM
oh that is so cute,Jo. A very enchanting little poem!
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Date: 9/28/2017 8:18:00 PM
A delightful, charming and lovely write Jo. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 9/28/2017 9:14:00 AM
So sweet Jo Daniel! Well done! :)
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Date: 9/28/2017 7:10:00 AM
Jo, a wondrous write! Well done! <3 Kim
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Date: 9/28/2017 7:03:00 AM
A poem as pretty as a rainbow dear little, sister!
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Date: 9/28/2017 6:50:00 AM
Lovely poem Jo, will do well in the contest..
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Date: 9/28/2017 6:42:00 AM
oh what a delightful poem Jo i can just imagine a child's thoughts being exactly like this:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2017 6:17:00 AM
- A lovely poem for this contest, Jo :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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