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My Boy - My Lovely Children

My boy When he first opened his subtle eyes, first ray of sun as if lit my morning sky, Withered away the pain of all my life, with inception of his one pleasant smile, Soft caress and fingers in thin silky hair, aura of twilight was his endless flair, Pearl drops were his tears in a row, ended always in iridescent rainbow, Inseparable even though a cut cord, a rhyming melody that my soul adores! Written May 21st, 2015 For contest "Show but don't tell" by Thomas Martin First place win Entered for "My lovely children" poetry contest by Laura loo

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Date: 2/28/2016 7:18:00 AM
Wow! I love this my dear friend, Upma! Truly amazing piece! Warm Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, GL
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Date: 2/27/2016 9:40:00 AM
"melody that my soul adores" beautiful line, Congratulations!
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Date: 2/27/2016 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Upma on your spectacular win! Keep it up and there will be more placements to come! :) _HANS
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Date: 2/27/2016 8:52:00 AM
My heartfelt congratulations, Dr. Upma. I love the dedication to your child: it's a deep love so tenderly expressed while his eyes open up to the light. It's a profound and inspiring poem written from a mother's heart. Best Wishes, Andrew.
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:07:00 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/26/2016 5:14:00 PM
Most beautiful lovely memories <3 Congratulations on your “My Lovely Children” contest win,Dr. Upma A. Sharma !!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/26/2016 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations, Upma on your winning write. I pray mom and baby are well today. I'll bet you are a great mom, Doc. and I'd also bet your son is a great son. Peace My friend:)
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Date: 2/26/2016 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2016 3:18:00 PM
so lovely to read this again congrats on your win Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2016 12:24:00 PM
Dr. Upma, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 5/26/2015 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this lovely poem, Dr. Upma, which paints the magnificent bond between mother and son. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:22:00 PM
Dr Upma, Conrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA
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Date: 5/24/2015 8:12:00 AM
Wonderful poem and a mother's bond is all powerful. Your poem reminds us that mother's love with such depth and intensity. A7. And I see that it won in a contest, bravo...
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Date: 5/23/2015 4:21:00 PM
Love this poem and the bond between you and your son, Upma! Congratulations on a worthy and merited win. // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/24/2015 4:11:00 AM
Thanks a lot Paul ! Appreciate ur visit and glad u liked !
Date: 5/22/2015 6:07:00 PM
you really got into the heart of it. The love for your precious son. Congrats in the contest.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/24/2015 4:11:00 AM
Thnx a lot dear Andrea!
Date: 5/22/2015 9:33:00 AM
Doc, congs, I liked the fact that you involved a boy in the poem, well thought.. i like it Bryan, Higs
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Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 5/26/2015 6:33:00 AM
So very much welcome dear Hugs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/24/2015 4:12:00 AM
Thnx Bryan! Appreciate ur visit!
Date: 5/21/2015 7:10:00 PM
Dr Upma, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/24/2015 4:12:00 AM
Thnx Skat my dear friend!
Date: 5/21/2015 2:08:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/24/2015 4:13:00 AM
Thnx Jan my good friend! Appreciate ur kind visits n words!
Date: 5/21/2015 11:22:00 AM
beautiful imagery Dr Sharma - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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