Hey Valentine, where are you? Are you hiding amid the peaks of a mountain or in the depths of an ocean? Are you in the sweltering heat of summer Or in the torrential flood of the monsoon? You are lost between winter’s chill and the verdure of spring. You make me shiver and sweat in turn. You are at once the soft touch of a feather and the sting of a speeding arrow! Love is now stagnant without flow like the duck weed that float over the greasy surface of still waters. You are crushed between the petals of a rose and its thorns. You are thrown hither and tither, by fevered minds. Oh, where are you? You hide between darkness and dawn, at the intersection of dreams and nightmares where love and heartache copulate. Where are you, Valentine? Better you be in your hide out. I don’t want to see your bloody face, a n y m o r e…..
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