My Black Wooden Spoon

With none in my infant's mouth, I was born
Even though a big silver spoon I craved
Of an affluence, I was left quite forlorn
Hence, contentment without the spoon I craved

For myself, a black wooden spoon I made
Spooning my mouth with every contentment
Said I then to my heart: 'good it's self-made'
Oh! I love the darkness, my excitement

In my tea cup, there was a stubborn storm
To break my spoon it gladly desired
With a strong resistance and great reform
Courageously said my spoon: 'you're fired'

The stubborn storm it calmed, where art the loon?
So adorable! My black wooden spoon







N.B: I have used 'my black wooden spoon' as a metaphor for contentment.
Stanza 1 expresses my wish to be born with a silver spoon in my mouth (I.e to be born rich)
Stanza 2 expresses my self-discipline, diligence and contentment since I wasn't born rich.
Stanza 3 expresses  that there are trying times difficult to deal with.
Stanza 4 expresses how contentment calms covetousness especially if one is a loon.

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Date: 10/24/2022 8:38:00 AM
Nice progression through insightful thoughts. Beautifully expressed Adeniji!
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 10/24/2022 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Alice
Date: 12/12/2017 6:40:00 PM
Oh! What an allusion. Rhetorical devices really add beauty to your poem. I thoroughly enjoyed your creative verse. I could feel the poem. Very strong message is given. I could remember few classical poem which I read in my post graduation. Be in touch. Be blessed and keep reviewing Pari Style poems.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 10/24/2022 9:43:00 AM
Thank you Sanket
Date: 12/9/2017 10:30:00 PM
Very spiritual poem, Adeniji. The struggle to find inner peace thru soul sustenance is an ever constant search. This is a well crafted poem of much substance. A splendid sculpt of prose. Love and smiles always.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/10/2017 5:07:00 AM
Dear Freddie, thank you for your review. Much love from me to you. Adeniji
Date: 10/2/2017 7:28:00 PM
A tremendous write! For me I would dispense of the explanation. I feel the piece is strong enough on its own and the latter detracts from your artistry.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 10/3/2017 7:06:00 AM
I really appreciate your constructive comment. Your presence on this platform has been positively felt through your active participation. Thank you for checking by once again.
Date: 4/20/2017 5:52:00 AM
Very nice and inspiring sonnet. Use of Rhetorical devices really add beauty to the poem. Good one. You can review my poems too.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 4/23/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, Sanket
Date: 3/26/2017 4:36:00 AM
Oh how do I understand you my brother, Adeniji! Excellent! A 7!
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 3/26/2017 5:43:00 AM
Thank you for checking by, Demetrios. I'm thrilled with your comment.
Date: 3/25/2017 7:10:00 PM
What a wise proverb in your creative Black Spoon poem, Adeniji! I really enjoyed it..a 7! :)
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 3/26/2017 3:13:00 AM
Oh! A 7? I'm honoured to receive that. Thank you Laura.
Date: 3/25/2017 11:51:00 AM
Adeniji, I enjoyed reading your poem and the explanation was right on, for myself, I know that wealth does not guarantee happiness, so for me the black wooden spoon would have been just right ~
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 3/25/2017 4:49:00 PM
Thank you for taking your time to read the poem. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/25/2017 6:15:00 AM
Hello Adeniji. Your black wooden spoon is most beautiful and most valuable. To express such words and have such thoughts you are blessed within thus making you a rich man. It is life not dollars that make us have the silver spoon. Well done in its entirety.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 3/25/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thank you for checking by.I really appreciate your upbuilding comment, Lisa.
Date: 3/24/2017 1:11:00 PM
- Being born to wealth, I do not believe it is happiness - I've never been rich ... and never will be ... - Wealth do not provide love and joy - A great poem, Adeniji - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 3/24/2017 4:43:00 PM
Oh yes, Anne. We all should be glad with whatever we have. Thank you for this comment.
Date: 3/24/2017 7:40:00 AM
Cheers, Adeniji. : ) It is better to want what we have, than what we do not have.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 3/24/2017 9:59:00 AM
Of course, Dough. I agree with you.
Date: 3/24/2017 12:50:00 AM
What a great sonnet Adeniji, and I love how you put notes up for us to understand it even better.It's a wonderful metaphorical and inspirational poem, thank you :)
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 3/24/2017 1:40:00 AM
Thank you Darren, I'm thrilled with your comment. Much love and joy to you.
Date: 3/23/2017 6:54:00 PM
What a clever idea for a poem, and you did it justice in every way. The spoon you created may not have been from a conventional material but it was the stronger, the wiser, and the better for it. Lucky man! Amitiés
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 3/23/2017 7:03:00 PM
Thank you Anne; I'm glad to read your comment. I used the black spoon as a metaphor for contentment even though I wasn't born with a silver spoon in my mouth. Your comment is indeed therapeutic to my soul, much love from me to you.
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