My Beloved Snow

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Poetry/Rhyme/My Beloved Snow
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1610-148-20
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, December 21, 2023
For the International Contest, Any Theme
Sponsor, Joseph May, Judged, 12/26/2023

Third Place

the Lady of Imladris — Dashing Through the Snow

When my Snow will fall, fall he will glow. His dance a crawl he speaks to me whispering come let's be carefree. Come with lips red plum let me kiss them cold, let me wrap you close. Wish love could unfold but my heart has froze.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/27/2023 9:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write/picture. Enjoy your win...............

Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2023 4:47:00 AM

Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings

Joseph May

Date: 12/27/2023 3:07:00 AM

Nicely penned Constance, Congrats on your win

Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2023 4:47:00 AM

Joseph, thank you so much for the contest and placement, and the compliment and congrats, blessings

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/21/2023 3:07:00 PM

outstanding, Constance! I liked 'come with lips red plum, let me kiss them cold...' The image was perfectly suited. Wishing you a Merry Christmas, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2023 4:52:00 AM

Sara, thank you so much for the compliment, I love those lines too, I decided to give "Snow" a face, Merry Christmas

Stephan McBride

Date: 12/21/2023 8:41:00 AM

I love your gift of writing, : ). Thanks for sharing with us all : )

Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2023 4:53:00 AM

Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment on my writing, it is everything to me, blessings