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I walk in the empty park, where winter twilight is dense and full; and the sky falls to shadows, and trees and ground blend; ebbing into vagueness . . . The path is wet under my feet, and little frills of ice adorn all things; crystalline, frosty and filigree, then, suddenly the air is full of snowflakes; Snow has come to be my beloved . . . I am breathless and wanting, with Snow floating among the hanging trees; and I feel his sweet silent kiss, upon my hair, my cheek and my ruby lips; as I stand still in his loving embrace . . . My world is quiet and tranquil, with my beloved Snow whispering softy; drifting, floating, wrapping his arms, and I whisper back, Snow I love you, knowing sadly he will leave me . . . _________________________________ November 24, 2012 (Edit) Poetry/Verse/My Beloved, Snow Copyright Protected, ID 12-1101-227-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into the contest, Jan 2019, Wk2 sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 1/11/2019 8:15:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Constance, for me in wintertime everything ebbs into vagueness. Congrats on your win. John
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2019 11:58:00 PM
John, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats ~
Date: 1/11/2019 12:55:00 AM
Lovely, Constance. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 1/15/2019 11:58:00 PM
Line, thanks for the lovely and the congrats ~
Date: 1/9/2019 11:50:00 PM
I so enjoyed that, really so beautiful . I could feel and see you standing in the snow. Must be so amazing !
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Date: 1/10/2019 9:03:00 AM
Maxie thanks for visiting my poem with the nice comment, yes I do love snow. I was born in a snow storm.
Date: 1/5/2019 9:26:00 AM
Wow! Snow in a sensual description. I totally agree with this because of the uniqueness of the beauty snow adds to the serenity of the season and no wonder, your soul has found companionship in its natural flare... This is wonderful and seasoning. Have a wonderful 2019.
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Date: 1/5/2019 12:44:00 PM
Funom thanks for the great comment, appreciate ~

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