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My Bed The Synathroesmic Cat

oh lovely bed, dishevelled bed, warm and cosy snuggle bed too nice to get out of bed too big for one it should be shared crisp clean sheets, to curl the toes bed, pack of pillows for my head. duvet to wrap around me, bed wish you served meals, need to be fed. coffee and toast make it a special bed crumbs to lie on, isn’t good it’s said best you throw me out, get a shower, oh bed, can I sneak back in an hour, my bed I love you. Penned 11th April 2013

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Date: 5/15/2013 11:36:00 AM
Seren, CONGRATULATIONS IN THE Synathroesmic Cat Contest. Have yourself a nice day ~SKAT~
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/15/2013 10:22:00 PM
Hi SKAT nice to see you, thanks for congrats....Seren
Date: 5/14/2013 5:51:00 PM
Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2013 10:53:00 PM
Hi Sara how are you? Thanks for commenting. ...Seren
Date: 5/14/2013 9:30:00 AM
I've seldom seen a love poem to an inanimate object but you gave us a gem. Congratulations on your no. 1. Love, joyce
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Date: 5/14/2013 10:48:00 PM
Thanks Joyce, ...Seren
Date: 5/14/2013 8:29:00 AM
I feel the same way about mine, congrats on your win Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 10:49:00 PM
Thank you Francine ....Seren
Date: 5/14/2013 12:23:00 AM
I totally agree, my comfort zone in many times. Really a mess now though needs some tlc. J.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 2:43:00 AM
LOL especially on cold winter days. ....Seren
Date: 5/13/2013 8:59:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations, in "The Synathroesmic Cat Contest." take care*LINDA
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 2:43:00 AM
Thank you Linda ...Seren
Date: 5/13/2013 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations. Thank you for your wonderful poem in my Synothroesmic Cat Contest. Best wishes, SuZ
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 2:44:00 AM
Hi Suz, thanks for liking my effort.....Seren
Date: 4/19/2013 12:33:00 AM
I just LOVE this one, Seren. A FAVE for this one!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/19/2013 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Andrea ...Seren
Date: 4/11/2013 12:43:00 AM
I love mine too..a refuge from the world. good one! BG
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/11/2013 5:06:00 AM
Lol BG sure is a nice place to snuggle down to think....Seren
Date: 4/10/2013 8:05:00 PM
Why is that bed so much more inviting when you have to get out of it than in the evening when you delay getting into it. Clever poem. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/11/2013 12:06:00 AM
How true Joyce, thanks for stopping by....Seren
Date: 4/10/2013 7:31:00 PM
This is simply magnificent, a delightful write my friend! I loved reading this clever poem this evening! I haven't done a poem for this contest yet, I'm afraid I won't come up with one as awesome as this one however! You've done terrific with this piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/12/2013 6:02:00 PM
Thanks Russell, sure yours will be excellent...Seren
Date: 4/10/2013 6:54:00 PM
Seren, a very beautifully poem, makes me feel like taking a nap. Structure , rhyming and the scheme is very nicely stated in your work. Great Job.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/11/2013 12:07:00 AM
Hello Lynn aww thanks for your comments.....Seren