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My Balloon

Come fly with me in my hot-air balloon. We'll skim over mountain tops very high. see golden sun replaced by silver moon as stars weave tapestry in ebon sky. With freedom we'll fly like birds in the air, in and out of clouds, dodging sudden storm. watch lightning's fingers spread everywhere, see how, in clouds of mist, rain showers born. Our balloon will take us where morning breaks, as dawn skips gaily over waking sky. Colors so lovely they'll make our heart ache, and clouds drift slowly by our vantage high. Alas, our beautiful journey must end But places visited and wonders found: lovliness, before we could but pretend. In a balloon, we'll sense magic around. February 5, 2023 for "Balloons" poetry contest by Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 3/3/2023 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. I love to watch the hot-air balloons in the sky. I would never ride in one. Have a blessed day......................
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Date: 2/8/2023 10:14:00 AM
An accentuation of the past, Ann, resonates with either film version of a balloon going around the world in so many days--marvelous execution, and all my best to you, Aloha William
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Date: 2/6/2023 8:29:00 PM
Enjoyed your balloon ride ! Poets are the repository of wonderful imagination. How many of us have responded to this topic in our own unique way ! A lovely sonnet Ann. All the Best.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/16/2023 9:49:00 AM
"Thank you, Valsa. I haven't flown in one because I don't like heights. :)
Date: 2/6/2023 2:16:00 AM
Wonderful description of a journey on a balloon. Great imagery.
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/6/2023 10:58:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!

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