My Apology

I never had the courage to tell you,
That I regret how much we changed;
And how much I truly hate the fact,
That the two of us are now estranged;

You deserved so much more from me,
Then I ever had to give;
And I hope that you’ll someday forgive me,
For the life I chose to live.

~For Barbara's Apology Accepted contest~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/2/2012 6:48:00 PM
Tirzah, it is nice to see some of your olden and good poems... congrats with your wonderful win,, in the "APOLOGY ACCEPTED" contest.. always~ PD
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Date: 1/7/2011 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine poem. It rings of truth and hope for forgiveness. Take care. Deb
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Date: 12/31/2010 9:37:00 AM
wonderful entry, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 12/31/2010 7:59:00 AM
Tirzah, a beautiful heartfelt apology.. Congratulations on your win! Happy 2011 to you and your family ;-)
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Date: 12/31/2010 7:40:00 AM
A very touching, and honest poem that is written from the heart! Congratulations on a well deserved win! ~ Happy New Year! love, Carrie
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Date: 12/31/2010 7:23:00 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your success with this fine write. Eamon
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Date: 12/31/2010 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Tirzah in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Apology Accepted". Love Carol
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Date: 12/31/2010 5:30:00 AM
Congrats Tirzah on your well deserved win and wish u a very happy New Year.
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Date: 12/31/2010 5:14:00 AM
Congrats Tirzah my friend on your first place win in the Apology Accepted contest with this wonderful apology .. incredible .. enjoy with luv and have a very happy and healthy new year ...poetically .. with luv..
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:45:00 PM
A beautiful and sincere apology. Congratulations on your no; 1. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:28:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place in my contest with this piece on the serious side. It is short and sincere..and I loved the last bit. Please soup mail me your address for your little surprise. BG
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Date: 12/25/2010 10:24:00 PM
A sad poem; nicely constructed apology though. Good luck in the contest! Keep it up!
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Date: 12/25/2010 9:53:00 PM
Now that is a heartfelt apology! A sure winner to me anyways, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 12/25/2010 5:46:00 PM
A wonderful entry for Barbara's contest Tirzah. Best of luck.
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