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My LOVER'S EYES (Senryu Series)

1   Alluring : mystic                                4   Mesmerizing  eyes  
      Light brown : almost hazel eyes              Caressing my Heart with LOVE               
      Always  full of LOVE                               Knowing they own me

2   Eyes with flecks of green                    5   My Barbara Jean
     Immersing my Heart and Soul                 Your light brown eyes filled with LOVE
      In Eternal LOVE                                     Capture my Heartbeat
3   Soporific eyes                                    6   Together our eyes
     Singing  a sweet lullaby                           Entwine the arc of Rainbows
     The song Forever LOVE                           Brown-green and blue gray

       This is for YOU ; Barbara Jean Gorelick ; with all my Heart , with all my LOVE
       Submitted for Pen to Face, Face to Pen Contest  Sponsered by Sami Al-khalili

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 2/15/2012 11:16:00 PM
Beautiful! Brown hazel eyes are really cool. Always, Laura
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:05:00 PM
Superb write.Thanks for commenting on my poem.
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Date: 5/13/2009 1:43:00 AM
Gazing into Barbara's eyes, you find so much beauty, HG. Lovely dedication to one of our most beloved writers!
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Date: 5/12/2009 8:00:00 AM
A rich weave of imagination, a sweet sculpture of words ... all the best in the contest. Great tribute to your soul.
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Date: 5/10/2009 9:07:00 AM
HG... just carried away on a cloud! sweet!!! Jim
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Date: 5/10/2009 12:38:00 AM
Nice one HG especially no 6.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/7/2009 11:48:00 PM
I agree with brother Ruben, one is enough. This is loaded. Anyway, I enjoyed it. This a manifestaion of a true love. Good luck in the contest. I have also one featured poem this week. Ernilando
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Date: 5/7/2009 8:54:00 AM
Such an adoring tribute to your love. Good luck in the contest with this beautiful poem HG! & thank you for your outspoken comments on my poem also. They are always welcomed! Thank you! ~Trudy~
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Date: 5/6/2009 3:24:00 PM
this is bombastic-excellent infact its going to my favs--charma
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Date: 5/5/2009 6:19:00 AM
Oh wow, wow, wow!!! Blown away by your beautiful, outstanding, loving, adoring poetry! And dedicated to one of my most favorite poetic friends! I feel BIG WINNER right here! Bravo dearest brother. Good luck! Lots of love, Shar xoxo
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Date: 5/4/2009 11:50:00 PM
Beautiful work HG, and best of luck in the contest...Raul
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:45:00 PM
You go BG, such a beautiful tribute from a man that knows how to love. Great job HG, I smiled to the end.
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Date: 5/4/2009 6:40:00 PM
HG..Your going to win, hands down..I cant wait to " pay up"..see your mail. BG
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Date: 5/4/2009 6:39:00 PM
Great! Great write! Good luck on the contest! - eduardo
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