My Lover's Eyes (Senryu Series)

1 Alluring : mystic 4 Mesmerizing eyes Light brown : almost hazel eyes Caressing my Heart with LOVE Always full of LOVE Knowing they own me 2 Eyes with flecks of green 5 My Barbara Jean Immersing my Heart and Soul Your light brown eyes filled with LOVE In Eternal LOVE Capture my Heartbeat 3 Soporific eyes 6 Together our eyes Singing a sweet lullaby Entwine the arc of Rainbows The song Forever LOVE Brown-green and blue gray This is for YOU ; Barbara Jean Gorelick ; with all my Heart , with all my LOVE Submitted for Pen to Face, Face to Pen Contest Sponsered by Sami Al-khalili

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/15/2012 11:16:00 PM

Beautiful! Brown hazel eyes are really cool. Always, Laura

Rima Anil.Naik

Date: 5/14/2009 10:05:00 PM

Superb write.Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/13/2009 1:43:00 AM

Gazing into Barbara's eyes, you find so much beauty, HG. Lovely dedication to one of our most beloved writers!

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/12/2009 8:00:00 AM

A rich weave of imagination, a sweet sculpture of words ... all the best in the contest. Great tribute to your soul.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/10/2009 9:07:00 AM

HG... just carried away on a cloud! sweet!!! Jim

Brian Strand

Date: 5/10/2009 12:38:00 AM

Nice one HG especially no 6.Rgds Brian

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/7/2009 11:48:00 PM

I agree with brother Ruben, one is enough. This is loaded. Anyway, I enjoyed it. This a manifestaion of a true love. Good luck in the contest. I have also one featured poem this week. Ernilando

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 5/7/2009 8:54:00 AM

Such an adoring tribute to your love. Good luck in the contest with this beautiful poem HG! & thank you for your outspoken comments on my poem also. They are always welcomed! Thank you! ~Trudy~

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/6/2009 3:24:00 PM

this is bombastic-excellent infact its going to my favs--charma

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/5/2009 6:19:00 AM

Oh wow, wow, wow!!! Blown away by your beautiful, outstanding, loving, adoring poetry! And dedicated to one of my most favorite poetic friends! I feel BIG WINNER right here! Bravo dearest brother. Good luck! Lots of love, Shar xoxo