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My Very Sweet Love - the Lanturne Style

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~My Very Sweet Love~ (Lanturne Suite) My Heart thinks Just of you All the time, day Night Hold You so Close, always Your loves in my Heart Your Love makes Me happy Through you my heart Sings And Each day Hunger for Your love, dreams of You I Love you Forever And always my Love. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2016
April.06.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~Author's Notes: The "Lanturne" is a syllabic Japanese form or style shaped like a paper lantern.

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Date: 4/6/2017 4:03:00 PM
I love the style and the love that seems to be unending in your poetry. Really nicely done.
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/6/2017 5:30:00 PM
Hi Chris!Thank you ever so kindly, for stopping by once again and commenting so beautifully here on my love poem and for your very generous 7 too.So happy that you liked this one Chris.I deeply appreciate it all:)). Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)) D

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