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My, Oh My Bright Fire

Relentless days, sleepless nights. Longing- peace, never achieved. Oh-bright Fire. Never burn out- Fortitude- Passion- Never waiver. For within, Relentless days- Sleepless nights- Lays a Fire, brighter than Sun, purest of Moon's glow. Oh-bright Fire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/9/2012 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Inspiration" contest Luis. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win Luis
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:16:00 PM
Luis congrats on your win, love it...David
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:46:00 PM
Congrats, Luis. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
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Date: 8/4/2012 8:21:00 PM
LUIS... . ;-) Congratulations with the inspirational words you offer through your poem...Thanks once again for supporting my contest.... LUV~ PD
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Date: 7/6/2012 12:35:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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Luis Martinez-Rivera
Date: 7/7/2012 8:48:00 AM
Glad it was enjoyed

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