Luis Martinez-Rivera Poet Free verse

My, Oh My Bright Fire

Relentless days,
sleepless nights.

Longing-
peace,
never achieved.

Oh-bright Fire.

Never burn out-

Fortitude-
Passion-
Never waiver.

For within,

Relentless days-
Sleepless nights-

Lays a Fire,
brighter than Sun,
purest of Moon's glow.

Oh-bright Fire.

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 9, 2012 at 12:27 PM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Inspiration" contest Luis. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage August 5, 2012 at 1:50 PM Congratulations on your win. Lee

Jonas L. Rozario August 5, 2012 at 1:38 PM Congrats on your win Luis

David Williams August 5, 2012 at 1:16 PM Luis congrats on your win, love it...David

Ralph Taylor August 5, 2012 at 12:46 PM Congrats, Luis. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

Poet Destroyer A August 4, 2012 at 8:21 PM LUIS... . ;-) Congratulations with the inspirational words you offer through your poem...Thanks once again for supporting my contest.... LUV~ PD

Marty Owens July 6, 2012 at 12:35 PM Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty Luis Martinez-Rivera July 7, 2012 at 8:48 AM Glad it was enjoyed