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Musk of His Flame

Somewhere along waxed moonglow, he is there like a sweet aftertaste on my lips; through warm fingers he groans as silence closes my eyelids... and even the pang that he leaves becomes a flame in itself. And what is compelling about the musk of this star is how his gaze can enter into my universe fondling hidden caves when he heaves soft love; raw as touches unbuttoning my cellar...he conquers me. A hundred whispers drape me from the mounds of my peak that burns like oil in me; and I am gone, so delirious into the beams of his arms. Till the falling of evening, when again he strokes his laughter on my hair, to drift there on my trails, like a winding branch dressing my skin with songs of flowers waking our glazed vows... he conquers me. Greg Barden's The Poet's Fire Challenge Submitted 9/22/2017 `````````````````````` Previously Written for Hotsy Totsy Contest 2/22/2015

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Date: 2/25/2015 12:16:00 PM
nette, you have woven a lovely poem with beautiful words and lines, a poem flowing with love, well done, and thanks for my wonderful placement in your Tarot contest, I am so honoured . . .
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Date: 2/24/2015 9:43:00 AM
You certainly have a way with words, Nette ,bringing them to life to enhance one,s day upon reading you..
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Date: 2/24/2015 8:55:00 AM
wow Nette, how I love to read your pens... a beautifully crafted piece... hugs
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Date: 2/23/2015 12:30:00 PM
Very imaginative use of words and skillfully constructed. It is well written with powerful imagery that liberate their presents from the page and enter our minds with ease of skill. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/22/2015 11:39:00 PM
Netteski, my dear. I so want to collaborate with you. Let's pick a contest and do it, okay?
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:54:00 PM
Tisshhhhh ! Yikes ! OK Nette; I'm not erotic....ok, maybe just a weee bit...ok ok...ALRIGHT...I am ! O yea...this was awesome...no mistaken, your are in love !............(or once was). Anywho, I enjoyed your write dear poet ! Have a beautiful weekend........much love, james
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:24:00 PM
Romantic and beautiful, I wish someone would save me!
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:14:00 PM
Very descriptive and passionate work..Almost hidden is the real nature of the poem..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/22/2015 5:51:00 PM
There is much hidden in these sensual verses -- my five senses are still trying to catch-up to my heart -- which already knows that this love is precious and filling. Rare and beautiful . . . .7
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Date: 2/22/2015 2:05:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette!! You come with a soft and gentle offering, dressed in a dreamy atmosphere that manages to emit a sensual touch that flirts with our imagination. #7 // paul
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Date: 2/22/2015 12:42:00 PM
I'm at a loss for words. The passionate images are gentle, inflammable! A banquet for the senses and overall, electrifying poetry.
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Date: 2/22/2015 5:58:00 AM
So sensual and breathtaking, your premium poem is beautiful from start to finish. I am melting because it is darn sweet as well!
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Date: 2/22/2015 2:17:00 AM
As always, Nette, sweetly garnished with your richly laden verse!! My very best regards! :-) john.
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Date: 2/22/2015 1:06:00 AM
Wow!!!!I am swimming in the liquid light of this beauty Nette! Stunning visuals in this perfect piece! 7 and I am fav'ing this one!
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Date: 2/22/2015 1:04:00 AM
INCREDIBLE poem! This is the spice that perks me up--- warm, delicious elixir. You got me, Nette. Fave!
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Date: 2/22/2015 12:27:00 AM
oh Nette...You write passion so well. Such unique imagery....Lovely. If it's for a contest...Good luck.
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