Musings On This November Day

A pall hangs over all today; the air is chill.
A dreary gloom descended before the day began!
It snowed the day before, and big branches
split off from two of our prized trees.
Was the snow so burdensome for them?
It was not so huge a snowfall
to warrant this small destruction of our trees.
My burdens too are not all that heavy
as those when in the past, life brought bigger storms to me.
And so I need to think of what is good . . .

November still holds remnants of bright October’s days
as her leaves are still dancing on November's streets.
I’m comfy in my bedroom writing poetry,
sneaking glances at my kitty cats.
My husband is a bit unwell, but in the autumn of our lives,
November holds the meaning of hope still glimmering
before the winter tries to take it toll.
The days of gray at time are sparked 
by sunny azure skies - those pleasant reminders 
that even midst our hardships, some brightness can peek through.

Before November’ cloak unfolds completely
and she melts away with snow into December,
we offer up our Thanks to God, many all together -
and I especially do so with gratitude
for life’s necessities I’ve been provided
and for all the  other simple joyful things, but best of all -
my friends and family.

Nov. 5, 2022
For the November Poetry Contest of Regina McIntosh
submitted Dec. 28, 2022 for Brian Strand's A Freed Verse Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Peck Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:55 AM
Your poem is very lovely, Andrea. I'm sorry about your tree, maybe a new branch will begin to bud...November is a thankful month, sometimes we forget all we're thankful for and need a reminder, like your poem. Congrats on your win!
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 3:30 AM
- A time when we spend a lot indoors... November is wet, cold and dark :) - Congratulations on your win, Andrea -
Alex Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:31 AM
Grat illustration together with thanksgiving. Congratulations!
Mcintosh Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:04 AM
Brilliant as usual. Love it. Congrats and God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Warlov Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 9:30 AM
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Loving Iii Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 1:14 PM
This inspires me to get a pen and pad and start musing again.
Pandit Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 5:39 AM
Wonderful musings, Andrea.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 12:08 AM
Great sentiments in this poem. Hope your husband will get well soon. Hugs.
George Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 11:13 PM
"that even midst our hardships, some brightness can peek through." Hope glimmers through cloudy skies. November being the month of thanks giving, words of gratitude rise from your heart. A beautiful poem.Wish you better days ahead Andrea !
Roper Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 7:56 PM
pondering of thoughts of the day and the beautiful past..
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November 5, 2022 at 7:19 PM
A lovely Dizain form poem in free verse Andrea. November is a special month of year, with it comes Remembrance and the anticipation of Christmas, a time to celebrate with hope for the future. I pray that your husband’s health improves soon… Belle
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November 5, 2022 at 6:06 PM
Yep, Winter is coming on. The bones tell me, legs especially with aging men. Very nicely written slice of your feeling life, as a wife and poetess. Wishing your husband a speedy recovery. I am also much more brighter in the spring and summer, like the birds and flowers. Excellent, sensitive read.
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