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Musings From a Meter Maid

A meter maid I’ve never been But Deb’s convinced me I have sinned So now I write this verse for her With hopes her wrath I won’t incur “Defrost” is said as de’ frost here The South is different, it’s so clear Sur-re’-al sometimes sounds sur-eel’ But what means more is how I feel About a poem and what it says If written by a serf or prez My meter’s time is running out This WAS a strain, beyond a doubt *LOL :) Entry for the Meter Contest Iambic Pentameter

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Date: 2/7/2012 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Debbie Guzzi 's "Change for the Meter" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 7:58:00 AM
Carolyn,congrats on your win in Debi's contest.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/6/2012 1:29:00 AM
nice win, thank you, Al
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Date: 2/6/2012 1:14:00 AM
This was a fun read for me, Carolyn! Really enjoyed this---heehee how I can relate to just stressing with meter! Super congrats on your win and I hope all is well with you! hugs :D
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Date: 2/5/2012 5:53:00 PM
Ah my friend I want to sing with YOu. You say PoTA toe, I say Po TAT o, you say TO ma TO, I say to MA to...congrad's on your win and MEGA hugs! Can't wait for your comp to work! Light & love
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Date: 2/5/2012 11:01:00 AM
You got every beat without a doubt. Congratulations Carolyn. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:52:00 AM
I like the way you put it! Mike
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:37:00 AM
Carolyn congrats on another superb win..David
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:23:00 AM
Well done in the winning placement Carolyn, pleasure to read you today...)
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:53:00 AM
Right or wrong, I liked it Carolyn. Congratulations
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Date: 1/24/2012 2:17:00 AM
Carolyn it reads ok to me, now that is a real honour to have a poem dedicated by you..David
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Date: 1/24/2012 12:11:00 AM
This was a really fun one to read, CArolyn. I too say sur'reel!! Sure hope you are feeling great today.
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Date: 1/23/2012 6:57:00 PM
Cute one..Good flow and rhythm..Could almost Rap..Enjoyed reading ..Good luck in Deb's contest...Reads like winning material..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2012 3:04:00 PM
love it, Carolyn. Great take on the contest ... ingenius and humorous. A winner in my book. I don't think you have incurred her wrath with this one!
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Date: 1/20/2012 3:40:00 PM
LOL, yes, I remember you telling me about Randy saying 'De frost.' The metre seemed spot on to me
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Date: 1/20/2012 12:37:00 PM
Here's wishing you all the best with this Carolyn...)
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Date: 1/19/2012 5:50:00 PM
This was on target, both in content, and in humor, and the meter sounded great to me (but I'm not the expert...that's for sure) ! I think you've nailed it, Carolyn!!
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Date: 1/19/2012 5:14:00 PM
Cute !! Smiling !! Enjoyed !!!
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Date: 1/19/2012 4:41:00 PM
Yep, the north and south do say words different, I know from experience, I've lived in both places! It is quite interesting to see those differences too as you well know! You poem brings a lot to light and about writing! I sure do hope that there is a way to add coins into your meter of life! I would put some in for you! This is a great poem Carolyn! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/19/2012 4:38:00 PM
You 'maid' me smile! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 1/19/2012 4:24:00 PM
thanks Carolyn now i get it, i think. harry
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