Musing My Soul By the Sea

lonely my steps take me to the sea with her echoing verge and I linger there pondering my existence_ the sun rests on a whispering wave pure gold and motionless and tranquil she hangs there reluctant it seems among streaks of mauve, gold and clouds she seems to float on a rolling sea oh, what a beautiful eventide_ I muse my soul- my journey thus far as the dimming orb sinks into the azure blue silently gone, gone, gone, gone_ 'till I am wrapped in hushed evening shadows __________________________ April 13, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/Musing My Soul by The Sea Copyright Protected, ID 20-1243-578-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Slipping Soul Sunsets Into The Sea sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke First Place
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Hamilton Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 1:41 PM
What wonderful imagery Constance, congrats on another winning poem!
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April 29, 2020 at 1:02 AM
John, thanks for the compliment and the congrats, appreciate _Constance
Roper Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 8:52 AM
Beautiful imagery, Dear Heart, I can see that you painted every brush stroke of this poem. Congratulations on you win. Hugs Eve
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April 28, 2020 at 10:23 AM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations and that sweet comment, appreciate _Constance
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April 26, 2020 at 9:25 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations on your placement in the contest!!
La France Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Heather, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations _Constance
Watt Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 6:18 PM
"Wrapped in hushed evening shadows" with the recent memory of a glorious day-ending masterpiece lingering in memory. Gorgeous write, Constance! Congrats on your #1 placement, well-deserved. Hugs ~ John
La France Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 10:09 AM
John, thanks for the compliment on my poem and the congratulations _Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 2:27 PM
I can certainly relate to this beautiful celebration of sunset Constance. Congratulations your wonderful First Placement! xxoo
La France Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 10:09 AM
Connie, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem and picture. I love the sea/beach. Enjoy your win........
La France Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 10:10 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment _Constance
Manassian Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 2:27 AM
Beautiful write. Great imagery. Makes one present in the lines. Good luck!
La France Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 10:01 AM
Eileen, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Theraven Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 11:09 PM
A fine way to spend your day, pondering this existence. Wrapped in such lovely shadows, standing together. -Richard
La France Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 10:01 AM
Richard, thanks for visiting and for the great comment _Constance
Smith Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 3:53 PM
"Wrapped in hushed shadows" great line Constance, best wishes...
La France Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 4:02 PM
Charlie, thanks for visiting and the compliment _Constance
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