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Musing My Soul By the Sea

lonely my steps take me to the sea with her echoing verge and I linger there pondering my existence_ the sun rests on a whispering wave pure gold and motionless and tranquil she hangs there reluctant it seems among streaks of mauve, gold and clouds she seems to float on a rolling sea oh, what a beautiful eventide_ I muse my soul- my journey thus far as the dimming orb sinks into the azure blue silently gone, gone, gone, gone_ 'till I am wrapped in hushed evening shadows __________________________ April 13, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/Musing My Soul by The Sea Copyright Protected, ID 20-1243-578-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Slipping Soul Sunsets Into The Sea sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke First Place

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Date: 4/28/2020 1:41:00 PM
What wonderful imagery Constance, congrats on another winning poem!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2020 1:02:00 AM
John, thanks for the compliment and the congrats, appreciate _Constance
Date: 4/28/2020 8:52:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Dear Heart, I can see that you painted every brush stroke of this poem. Congratulations on you win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/28/2020 10:23:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations and that sweet comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 4/26/2020 9:25:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations on your placement in the contest!!
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Date: 4/27/2020 10:08:00 AM
Heather, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 4/26/2020 6:18:00 PM
"Wrapped in hushed evening shadows" with the recent memory of a glorious day-ending masterpiece lingering in memory. Gorgeous write, Constance! Congrats on your #1 placement, well-deserved. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 4/27/2020 10:09:00 AM
John, thanks for the compliment on my poem and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 4/26/2020 2:27:00 PM
I can certainly relate to this beautiful celebration of sunset Constance. Congratulations your wonderful First Placement! xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 4/27/2020 10:09:00 AM
Connie, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 4/26/2020 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem and picture. I love the sea/beach. Enjoy your win........
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Date: 4/27/2020 10:10:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment _Constance
Date: 4/14/2020 2:27:00 AM
Beautiful write. Great imagery. Makes one present in the lines. Good luck!
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Date: 4/14/2020 10:01:00 AM
Eileen, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 4/13/2020 11:09:00 PM
A fine way to spend your day, pondering this existence. Wrapped in such lovely shadows, standing together. -Richard
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Date: 4/14/2020 10:01:00 AM
Richard, thanks for visiting and for the great comment _Constance
Date: 4/13/2020 3:53:00 PM
"Wrapped in hushed shadows" great line Constance, best wishes...
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Date: 4/13/2020 4:02:00 PM
Charlie, thanks for visiting and the compliment _Constance

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