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Music To My Ears

The bang of drums, The strum of guitar, Everyone hums, As music streams out, Art is created, With each musical note, A person's soul is activated, Bringing joy to all, Bonnie on keyboard, Jaiah on drums, With them I could never get bored, And I'm on bass, But I'm only learning, For Jaiah that's not the case, Shes been playing since drums since yr 3, I'm in an amazing band, Music I finally enjoy, to them I will stand, And clap and shout.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/13/2023 8:17:00 AM

Hello Fire Bird, I can just hear the music of the band. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/13/2023 3:40:00 PM

Hello Fire Bird, You are welcome. enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene/

Fire Bird
Date: 11/13/2023 12:09:00 PM

Thanks Darlene, you enjoy your day to! - Phoenix :)

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 11/12/2023 11:30:00 PM

I wish i could have been in a band, writing so many songs, appreciated by many, but unfortunate, my dream was never realized, You have written the feeling that i would have surely had, if i was in a band. Beautiful.

Fire Bird
Date: 11/13/2023 12:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, I love my band, they help me release all my emotions into music. When you write poems, you are creating music, you're a one-man band! - Phoenix :)

Jeff Connelly

Date: 11/12/2023 1:34:00 PM

Banding together with friends is always a creative endeavor Fire Bird. The bang of drums; strums, and hums along with a keyboard and bass suggest a possible rock genre. May I ask the band's name and if you can be heard on any of the social medias?

Fire Bird
Date: 11/20/2023 11:52:00 AM

Thank you Jeff! - Phoenix :)

Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/13/2023 11:43:00 AM

Yes, please keep me posted Phoenix. Best of luck

Fire Bird
Date: 11/12/2023 9:28:00 PM

Hi Jeff, it's just a school project, but I would love to continue the band, and yes, we all love Rock, especially bands like MCR and Green day, if we continue this band, I will let you know! Also, at the moment we don't have a band name, thank you for taking interest, I will contact you if we keep the band going! :D - Phoenix :)

Aly Bahr

Date: 9/25/2023 3:52:00 PM

It is great to feel good with your friends and to be creative with music, something you love and can share with others. Nice words.

Fire Bird
Date: 9/27/2023 3:16:00 AM

Hi Aly, thanks for the comment, I really enjoy the time I have with my friends in music! - Phoenix :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/11/2023 7:10:00 PM

Looks like you three are this generation's successors to 'the Three Musketeers:' One for all, and all for One!' ~ Alexander Dumas is smiling somewhere. Nice! :) gw

Fire Bird
Date: 9/11/2023 7:23:00 PM

We hope so!! -Phoenix :)

Curie Stark

Date: 9/10/2023 11:48:00 PM

Indeed a nice beat

Fire Bird
Date: 9/11/2023 12:57:00 AM

Thank you, Curie, I enjoy writing poems about my friends to see their reaction and make them happy! - Phoenix :)

Writing Muse

Date: 9/10/2023 7:47:00 PM

the onomatopia really attracted me into this poem, and i love the special mention ;) jk lovely poem <3

Fire Bird
Date: 9/10/2023 7:49:00 PM

Thanks Jaiah, but I could never express in any poem how great of friends you and Bonnie are to me!!

Bonnie Lieschke

Date: 9/10/2023 7:45:00 PM

Wow, amazing poem, especially because it includes me, just kidding. I like how you started with, The bang of drums The strum of guitar I really think you set the mood! Amazing work phoenix! <3

Bonnie Lieschke
Date: 9/10/2023 7:49:00 PM

Thanks to you to phoenix and keep up the good work writing all these amazing poems!!!

Fire Bird
Date: 9/10/2023 7:48:00 PM

Thanks Bonnie, I knew that if I included you, you would like me even more!! Just kidding!! Thank you!

Fire Bird

Date: 9/10/2023 7:43:00 PM

Shout out to my friend's; Bonnie, Jaiah, you are amazing friends thank you for everything you have done for me.

Writing Muse
Date: 9/10/2023 7:48:00 PM

tyyy same to u too <3