Unseeking Seeker Poet Sonnet

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Music of the Spheres

Drawn to a template, we wish to colour,
we yet know not the force that drew us in
but we write away as would a scholar,
inspired by thoughts, silencing worldly din.

Inspirations that in-pour, are God's grace,
reverberating through our conscious mind,
wherein doing nothing, each wave we trace
as symbols hoping they are well aligned.

Although we know the word is not the thing,
we express ourselves as best as we can,
basking in the glow of joy it does bring
and this dear friends is our only game plan.

This is the way we are, by night and day ~ 
Creativity calls and so we play

29-October-2022

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Constance La France November 2, 2022 at 7:15 AM Seeker, a beautiful write and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings Unseeking Seeker November 2, 2022 at 7:49 AM Thank you dear Constance

Anitha Jayasankar November 1, 2022 at 11:16 PM Awesome Seeker... my belated wishes and congratulations on your POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani Unseeking Seeker November 1, 2022 at 11:17 PM Thank you, Anitha ~ :)

Victor Buhagiar November 1, 2022 at 6:41 AM My belated congratulations on your POTD. Unseeking Seeker November 1, 2022 at 8:20 AM Thank you, Victor

Susan Lawrence October 31, 2022 at 5:42 PM Love this and it’s emotions, sentiment and call to the journey before us . Congratulations on POTD dear US ! Creativity calls and so we play !! Yes how blessed to play like this ! Susan :) Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 6:17 PM Thank you, Susan ~ hope you are doing well

Brandy Nicole October 31, 2022 at 5:00 PM I completely agree, scribbling outside the lines *is* so much fun. Being creative with words, is like watching a painting come to life. Congratulations Unseeking Seeker, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 5:26 PM Thank you, Brandy ~ each poet sings a never ending song

John Watt October 31, 2022 at 4:59 PM A nice depiction of the process from idea to choosing words to express the idea to sharing the idea with others. "Basking in the glow of joy it does bring" says so much. Congrats on your POTD. Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 5:25 PM Thank you John ~ poetic expression an affirmation, crystallising the flickers of stirrings within

Beryl Edmonds October 31, 2022 at 4:18 PM Lovely poetry, congratulations on poem of the day… Belle Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 5:22 PM Thank you, Belle

Elizabeth Mccann October 31, 2022 at 2:04 PM I can only add to the great appreciation we all feel for your continued insight and delightful expression of it. Elizabeth Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 5:22 PM Thank you, Elizabeth ~ so happy you enjoyed

Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2022 at 12:17 PM - A beautiful poem ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 5:21 PM Thank you, Sunshine

Gershon Wolf October 31, 2022 at 10:42 AM Yes, the word is not the thing -- but people act as if it is, interestingly. I guess that's part of being creative! Congrats to you, Seeker, on POTD. ~ Gershon Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 5:21 PM Thanks gw ~ like describing the fulcrum of a fragrance

L Milton Hankins October 31, 2022 at 9:50 AM Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Unseeking Seeker! Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 5:20 PM Thank you, Milt!

Christuraj Alex October 31, 2022 at 9:20 AM "doing nothing, each wave we trace", "our only game plan" - Irony mingled with satire, reality, human morality and modality... Beautiful work. Congratulations! Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 5:19 PM Thank you, Chris ~ your kind comments make the poem look better than it is!

Terry Flood October 31, 2022 at 8:38 AM I’m with Heidi, ‘Creativity calls and so we play’, what a line… I wish I’d written it. Congrats on POTD. Terry Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 9:17 AM Thank you Terry!

Bill Baker October 31, 2022 at 6:56 AM A FAV, my friend. I love Sonnets! This one was well written with a strong message and good description of who we are as poets. Congratulations on your POTD, Unseeking Seeker. Peace be with you, Bill Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 9:16 AM Thank you Bill ~ yes, the words kind of came in for this composition, as it does for all, actually :) Thanks for the fav ~ delighted you enjoyed!

Heidi Sands October 31, 2022 at 6:30 AM Creativity calls and so we play. I like that. Congratulations for POTD :) Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 6:45 AM Thank you, Heidi :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury October 31, 2022 at 5:38 AM Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Poet. "Creativity calls and so we play" - brilliant ending of a profound thoughtful poem! BW ~ Mala Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 6:04 AM Thank you, Mala ~ your comments are more valuable than the POTD!

Linda Alice Fowler October 31, 2022 at 5:27 AM Congratulations the honor of POTD. :) Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 6:03 AM Thank you, Linda :)

Vijay Pandit October 31, 2022 at 5:17 AM BIG congrats on POTD, US. Enjoy your day. Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 6:02 AM Thank you, Vijay ~ hope you are doing well

Mike Gentile October 31, 2022 at 4:43 AM Congratulations on your POTD honors!!! Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 4:49 AM Thank you, Mike

Tania Kitchin October 31, 2022 at 4:24 AM Beautiful, congratulations on POTD! Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 4:49 AM Thank you, Tania

Kim Rodrigues October 31, 2022 at 3:16 AM Very nice! Congratulations on POTD! Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 3:43 AM Thank you, Kim

David Kavanagh October 31, 2022 at 2:10 AM Your poems reverberate throughout the soup each day Seeker, Congratulations on this particular one receiving POTD honours, cheers David Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 2:17 AM Thank you, David. I was surprised to see this as POTD

Valsa George October 31, 2022 at 1:40 AM Love the poem and its title. Inspiration that pours in are indeed God's grace. As creativity calls, we poets act ! Great thoughts... ! Congratulations on this well deserved honor, dear Seeker friend ! Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 2:16 AM Thank you dear Valsa

Tom Cunningham October 31, 2022 at 12:47 AM Beautiful sonnet US, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom Unseeking Seeker October 31, 2022 at 1:24 AM Thank you, Tom!

Darlene De Beaulieu October 29, 2022 at 12:36 PM Hello Unseeking Seeker, oh----Wow!. I like this . My faV. Blessings my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 30, 2022 at 7:18 AM Hello Unseeking Seeker, you are welcome. Blessings my friend. Unseeking Seeker October 29, 2022 at 6:28 PM Thank you, Darlene :)

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